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    I really enjoyed this and liked the characters. I thought your Satan was excellent and I enjoyed his reactions and the dialogue between him and Rice.

    The end was great. I got a good visual of Satan, clapping and laughing in the midst of the gore and horrified people.

    I'm definitely looking forward to seeing it after its produced.
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    Thanks, bro! I aim to please...myself...lol.

    Seriously though, good feedback fuels the fires of creativity!


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    Good job. I am glad you didn't cut it down would have killed the story. Can't wait to see the film.
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    Thanks for the read, Pauly! I look forward to not getting hitted.


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    gaaaah, why'd you go over the limit?

    not gonna lie, though, there are some parts of the original version I prefer over this one. it's been awhile, and I've only read this version once, but that's what I remember.

    Love it, though. I do love this script.


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    Loved it! Didn't even realize that it was over the limit until I read the post above.
    I saw the ending coming before it occurred but it didn't matter.

    The writing was excellent and I bought into every line.

    Great work!

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    You went over the limit?! Didn't bother me none, thought it was well played script, nice character work, especially with Satan. Great ending, a bit expected, but it worked. Nice job and keep it up.


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    The newest version has an alternate ending, a BETTER ending.


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    I loved the ending! I would be interested in reading the alternate though.


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    A better ending?


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