"Days of reckoning"

[alex whitmer]

days of doh

Am I mis-reading this?

Hey, definitely looking forward to reading it.

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[Noel Evans]

HEH That would also be a good title - Days of... DOH!

Cheers Alex. Im still thinking there might be a complete title change. The premise remains the same.

[Noel Evans]

Uploaded!

[Michael Anthony Horrigan]

Love the banner!

Cheers,

Mike

[jamiejay]

i agree... i like "days of reckoning". very apocalyptic.

[Noel Evans]

Love the banner!

Cheers,

Mike

Im hoping that after people read it they can look at the banner and see the approach. We shall see.

[krestofre]

I've read it twice now, and my biggest question is what was going on between Paul and Sarah before he "opened his eyes?" What was their relationship?


****SPOILERS****

Before Paul's encounter with the old man, did he not see Sarah's scars? Was he just living in denial? There's a huge chunk of time in the script that is not addressed and I'm struggling to understand how that is resolved with the events in the script.

I'm interested to hear you talk about this script, but figure you'll want some more feedback before you go into it. In the meantime I'm going to have to think about this one some more....

[Noel Evans]

Hi mate. Thanks for reading.

SPOILER

On page 1

Paul’s once high
school sweetheart and now wife. She sleeps soundly.

[Noel Evans]

Before Paul's encounter with the old man, did he not see Sarah's scars? Was he just living in denial?

Bingo. Rest in PM. And some feedback on anything good or bad might help also.

[preston]

good, solid scriptwriting here. i will re-read to see if i can "fill in the blanks" because i'm not exactly sure what the deal is. you're gonna make me think!

i'll get back to you... it's late now though, so it'll be tomorrow.