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    PRIME by Michael Anthony Horrigan
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    PRIME

    A man encounters a hostile alien life-form.




    Hope you like it.

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    I love anything with a hostile alien life-form in it.


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    Love your avatar! Bioshock is too cool for school!


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    Def looking forward to it, Michael.


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    Thanks, Mark. Don't get your hopes up though. It was thrown together at the very last minute. I just felt compelled to enter something.

    I enjoyed writing it though. It's a story that has been kicking around in my skull for quite some time.


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    Well, your stories are always unique, so even if it's a work in progress, this might be a good place for you to shake it out.


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    Damn, Mike, could it BE any more epic? What you have here is not so much a short film as the first ten minutes of a major intergalactic throwdown.


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    LOL!

    Thanks. I hope that means you liked it.

    It is definitely the beginning of something more.

    Cheers,

    Mike


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    I'd show less of the first alien. Keep's it more of a mystery when you do finally reveal. Once you gave a description of the alien in it's space ship, I figured it wasn't there to harm your main character.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Mobie540 View Post
    I'd show less of the first alien. Keep's it more of a mystery when you do finally reveal. Once you gave a description of the alien in it's space ship, I figured it wasn't there to harm your main character.
    That's cool. I didn't really intend for it to be a surprise. Obviously the character being chased has no idea, but I did let the audience in on it early I thought.
    As well as the condition of the Alien.

    I still believe that not everyone will get that right off the bat though. Still, in no way was it intended as a "gotcha" reveal.

    Thanks for reading!

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