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    Two men, each pursuing the other. One haunted by his past. One haunted by his future. Neither with anything left to lose.


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    Geez, coming up with the logline almost took me as long as coming up with the whole idea. HA!

    This is only the second screenplay I've written and my first short. I'm just about done with it, just polishing up some details/ dialogue.
    But I feel pretty good about what I've got so far.

    If I get enough positive feedback on it, I'm thinking it may be a good prequel for a feature length screenplay. But I'll wait and see what everybody thinks, there are a lot of good, experienced folks here.

    I'm just happy to be able to enter a fest while I'm saving up for a camera, so I can participate in the other fests.
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    Sounds interesting.

    Know what you mean about loglines. Hate writing them.


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    Loglines can be one of the more difficult aspects in promoting an idea. When I write, sometimes the logline is extremely apparent and it just pops into my head. But I (and I think all of us) have had those moments where I can't for the life of me come up with a good one.

    Sounds cood conlan, I look forward to the read. Good luck everyone!


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    Thanks guys, I finished the screenplay. I'm pretty happy with it, looks like it's going to be straight up action.
    Now I guess I'll work on a poster, started sketching up some ideas.

    I'm looking forward to reading everybodies screenplays.


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    on the subject of posters. Does everyone need/intend to do one?


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    My script inspired movie poster.
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    After reading some of these other loglines, I'm afraid mine may be a little run of the mill. But its my first fest and my short script, so I'm going to remain optimistic and I'm looking forward to some good honest critique.
    I figure you can learn something from everything and everybody.

    I don't really have anything new to say, I'm just chomping at the bit to start reading the scripts.
    Last edited by Russell Moore; 03-23-2009 at 06:03 PM.


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    For the record, I think your logline is one of the stronger ones.
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    Why am I here now, on DVXuser? I should be writing. We all should be writing.


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    Thanks, I appreciate it. This whole fest is turning out to be a great learning process already.


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