"Basement Story" - wcs

[Ted Arabian]

Thanks for sharing that! Seriously.

... It has to say something important about the character or advance the plot, or the audience will lose faith in your abilities as a storyteller.

Storytelling seems to be one of the most difficult things about filmmaking.

I know that I fall in love with shots and want to use them... even if it doesn't propel the story line. This is a great lesson that you are sharing.

I feel that you achieved in what you set forth to do. You focused on your story and telling it. And you did so with little action and words. Bravo.

There are always things to work on... that's why we are here and not at Sundance!

Good luck on your future projects! I really enjoyed your work here.

Best,

Ted

[mentatDUKE]

This was an interesting film. The female lead was pretty engaging. I found her character unique also. I mean what kind of person would force a DVD marathon on their significant other to prove a point? She's a talented actress.

Cool twist at the end. Nice one.

[Jack Daniel Stanley]

Some nice writing here. I was pretty hooked by the end.