First time I've ever posted work on this site, I've been a long time viewer but now I'm a junior at UC and finally got a video project I was excited about, so here's the final product. It came out alright, considering the actors were my parents , girlfriend's cousins, as well as the old man at my work. And I dont know s*%t about lighting. Criticism would be appreciated because I'm trying to perfect my craft. thanks!
oh, and the short concept is on the vimeo site in case you're confused.
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12-05-2007 09:21 AM
Last edited by xyouthx; 12-05-2007 at 09:38 AM.
12-05-2007 09:30 AM
Wow, I thought that was REALLY good! Shots were great and it had a pretty deep impact on me. The only shot I didn't like was when the man was walking into the shop I suppose and it was night. The camera just didn't have enough to work with, but that comes down to lighting of course.
The rest though was well shot, well edited and went with the pace of the song. The old man was brilliant, but the husband and wife/two children needed a little work. Again, you said they were your parents and girlfriend's cousins, so in this case thats amazing.
I can't wait to see what you can do with some real actors and maybe using some lighting. Good work and best of luck to you!
-Kegan"I dream for a living" - Steven Spielberg
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12-05-2007 04:34 PM
I thought it was pretty good.
I really liked your shot composition.
By the way did you produce the "From Nothing" video?
12-06-2007 02:22 PM
Haha I ride bmx
and a couple of my buddy's from around the Dayton area were talking about it.
Plus it was on the come up.
12-06-2007 06:36 PM
just the trailer for it