Wow. I got mine uploaded exactly 5 seconds before cut-off time.
Extended Version:
http://solomonchase.com/kinetica_extended.mp4
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Solomon Chase's Adfest Entry - "Focus"
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08-01-2007 08:01 AM
Last edited by Solomon Chase; 08-08-2007 at 08:44 PM.
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08-01-2007 07:25 PM
oh yea, i heard about this one. can't wait to see it!
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08-01-2007 07:37 PM
Haha. I almost forgot to put your name in the credits. After re-rendering I came in a few seconds from the deadline.
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oh yea, i heard about this one. can't wait to see it!
Turned out really good, I'll be posting an extended cut as well.
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08-02-2007 06:50 AM
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08-02-2007 08:09 AM
nice spot... One thing, the product shot looked kind of drab... just my opinion... otherwise, good spot... though if these guys are partners in crime, I am sure they wouldn't just split up like that, lol.
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08-02-2007 08:22 AM
Very well done and funny to boot. I did find the partners splitting up strange at first, but I understood why you did it at the end.
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08-02-2007 02:35 PM
Thanks! Originally Posted by Gulroc
The original script shows why they split up, but 30 seconds was too much of a cram. (heck, it still is. The current ad has 20 shots in 30 seconds!)
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08-02-2007 02:38 PM
If anyone else wants to comment on the pacing or anything that seemed off, I'd be glad to hear it. It's hard for me to look at it from a "first time viewing" perspective
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08-02-2007 02:45 PM
I liked the plot and it was well shot. The angles were cool and there was obvious production value behind it. However, it felt more like a short film edited down to the length of an ad. It left me kind of confused as if someone played a feature film on fast-forward.
Also, now, after about 14 hours of watching the ad, I remember the plot but don't remember what the product was.
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