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    I like the editing and think that the production value was pretty high... I just couldn't see this being an actual ad for a product...
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    Pros: I thought it was a great idea and shot very well. Nice lighting.

    Cons: Music didn't fit.
    The payoff at the end seemed rushed.
    I think a better script could have helped alot. A kid in bed, wind blowing drapes, tree shadows, the cuhrazy clown toy, ect.

    Again, it looked nice and was well edited.
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    you are in my top three... for some reason this just cracked me up.. very fun.
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    I am not a serious filmmaker, I am however serious about making more fun movies.


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    Thanks for the feedback

    Glad some of you liked it and I really appreciate the criticisms.



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