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Great job, Chris! Always amazing to see what you coax out of your students. You should be very proud.

I really like your writing style. Your dialogue is great. I absolutely love the visual of them all coming to and realizing they're upside down.
Problem is, you ratchet up a fair amount of tension...

Here's my thoughts on this:
* First and foremost: beautifully written action. Great flow. Flies by. Great description.
* The Zombie/Vamp "love" story is fantastic. I'm really cheering for these...

I really enjoyed this. I'm kind of a newcomer around here, so you'll have to forgive me for repeating a bunch of stuff that everyone else is, apparently, well aware of:
You have an easy style,...

Nice work Derek. Some very creepy imagery.

A few things:

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There is a LOT of ink on these pages. I understand that this is a very visual short script, and that you can get away with some...

I dig this a lot, Chris. Very cool.

The “he thinks he’s alive but he’s dead” twist at the end got me good. Didn’t see it coming, and I really loved how that moment is what FREED HIM.
In fact,...

Fantastic work Marnie! Serious.

This was a standard (though very well written) “creepy guy abducts innocent girl” scenario, but the cat imagery you played with throughout the entire script...

What the hell!? We got us a real live Rustus Trailaparkus on our hands! Where did you learn how poor white people talk??? Because I hate to feed your bloated ego but…boy you nailed it. I was...

Quick disclosure: ever since I’ve become a father, I don't really have the stomach for pedophile characters. The use of pedophilia as a source of tension...I just have to say... turns me off like a...

A dying man receives the gift of omniscience.

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Really stunning, Chris.

Here's what I love: You came to a contest begging for treasonous plot twists and turncoat antagonists, and waded in with an absolutely heartbreaking statement on the...

Say my name.
Loud and proud, beyotches.

So I heard someone here was recognized for a "Patchwork" something or a "West-up Kid." Something something?

I hope it was like Slumdog Millionaire....

Great job, Chris.

To echo the thoughts I left at MP:

It didn't bother me AT ALL that there wasn't some sort of critical mass moment when she decided to move on.

It was the void of...