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Get well, man. Nothing like gettins sick from a crowd of musicians!

It's looking like I'm not gonna be able to get down there until way late.
Thinking I might sit this one out after all. Sorry,...

Yeah, I'm in. 8p is fine for me.
That's in the old Biscuit Company building. Cool spot.

Sounds good me.
The more the merrier.

@bill have a blast at NAMM!

Sounds good. I'm in. Penciled for Thurs.

Well I guess I missed it. Damn.
Next time. Please send me any updates: AJTCreative (at) gmail (dot) com

Thanks! I'm in Burbank.

Knock 'em dead, Zaza.

Thanks guys.

We borrowed a kit from a bunch of folks and my buddy stepped up who records bands and that's that.
We hired a special makeup effects person and I'm like a kid in a candy store.

I can't wait to...

@Brandon... Yeah, I saw your ad and smiled. Copious amounts of empathy in your general direction.

Thanks Zaza, I consider twistedness to be a gift from god, whoever the hell she is.

Got any dramadies?

I'm hopeful, guys.

I can only pay gas. There will be craft and catering, IMDB and a copy of the thing.

I wrote and am directing this 5 page thriller/horror thing. It's got effects, it's got animals, it's got crazy...

Ahhhhh. Gotcha.

Busy is good. It's certainly paying off. Keep it up.
I just call it like I see it, glad it was helpful.

What's 'Bloodfest'?

Thanks for the compliments and suggestions!

Super clean writing. Definitely had some funny in there.
My only suggestion is to really delve into that character trate thing and trick out your guys. Since it's not really plot driven, you could...

Thanks man. Much appreciated feedback.

I never said Heaven or Hell... You did! ;p muhahahahaha!

Hey Darren. Since there are so few of us, I'm doing extended reviews. Here goes...

Overall, I get the stressed out, under appreciated, over worked elf and his mates who let loose, have a little...

Damn. Your writing has improved MEGA since the last thing of yours I read. Nice going. Hey, I dug this story a lot.
It's really bent. I think the ending needs to be more of a homerun.

The gag...

I thought the idea of the twist was funny as hell. The execution left a little to be desired, in terms of the end...
You have this very visual story and we are putting all the pieces together and...

You got my review. I'd will say, this was my kinda Holiday party.
When's the next one? I have someone I like to invite....

Thanks for the read. Here's my retort.

The main claim here is that you didn't understand what's happening and that the piece lacks stucture. A fair claim.

But, through speculation, you...

HOLIDAY CHEER

"Join us to celebrate the Holiday"

READ IT: HERE

THREAD: HERE


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READ IT HERE: HOLIDAY CHEER

Just a quick thanks to all who sent me reviews.
They were all very helpful and insightful. :thumbsup: