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  1. Thread: Results

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    Sticky: Hi Guys! I came 23 out of 32 - thanks for the...

    Hi Guys! I came 23 out of 32 - thanks for the votes!!!
  2. Thread: Results

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    Sticky: Congrats to those in the top band - both of my...

    Congrats to those in the top band - both of my favs made the top 5, well pleased with results!
    Can't wait 'till the next Script Fest now... hone the new skills learnt from this one. Should you all...
  3. Thread: Copperhead

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    Hi Jamiejay! Thanks for the feedback. Now......

    Hi Jamiejay! Thanks for the feedback.
    Now... Willard's Dad was the soldier who shot the deserter in the WW2 scene, and Raef's Dad was the soldier who tried to talk the deserter into coming back......
  4. Thread: Copperhead

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    Hi Preston - thanks for the feedback, and yeh,...

    Hi Preston - thanks for the feedback, and yeh, all true - except the 'choppy dialogue' bit, disagree on that. As you rightly say, p. 3 bookish and that's because I write short stories / and mystery...
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    That's my ratings in now, after a couple of...

    That's my ratings in now, after a couple of e-mails to LarryR!
  6. Thread: Prizes?

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    How about a book for me - 'Scriptwriting For...

    How about a book for me - 'Scriptwriting For Dummies'??? oink oink!
  7. Thread: Copperhead

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    Thanks Rustom for the advice - and explained in a...

    Thanks Rustom for the advice - and explained in a way that I can understand. This first script has been a huge learning experience for me. Before going on to write another script, I'll be making...
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    Hi Blaine! Have you read The Patch-Up Kid? It's 6...

    Hi Blaine! Have you read The Patch-Up Kid? It's 6 pages and a stunner.
  9. Thread: Going Home

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    Hi again! Just doing some re-reads - and you are...

    Hi again! Just doing some re-reads - and you are so right about keeping Georgine!
    S..o..r..r..y
  10. Thread: Wow!

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    It's SO exciting picking up the tech. jargon! I...

    It's SO exciting picking up the tech. jargon!
    I am rapt to understand now what a 'slugline' is...
    Blaine is my hero!!!
  11. Thread: Rating Threads!

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    Why bother with these rating stars if they don't...

    Why bother with these rating stars if they don't mean anything - or is there a 'subtext' to the stars... some kind of conspiracy...hehe
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    Hi again! Just been reading Jamiejay's feedback...

    Hi again! Just been reading Jamiejay's feedback on you script... feel the need to add - me too - Star War type critters popped into my head, and the remained for the rest of the script reading....
  13. Thread: Lawmen

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    Hi again! I've been doing re-reads on scripts and...

    Hi again! I've been doing re-reads on scripts and just to say, I'm starting to get the darker tone better, second time around. Agree that both the action and the dialogue could do with pulling in......
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    Sticky: The script I submitted to the WesternFest was the...

    The script I submitted to the WesternFest was the first EVER script I have written.
    I am a 59yearold housewife from Scotland who enjoys writing short stories as a hobby.
    The feedback I have...
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    Yay! Here is me thinking my 7 page script to be...

    Yay! Here is me thinking my 7 page script to be short in comparison with the others.
    Ok, so I am new and have little of (tech) value to say... but I have loadsa common sense. Can't think why you...
  16. Thread: Copperhead

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    Mark C - thanks for the feedback on my script....

    Mark C - thanks for the feedback on my script. Being Scottish, I had to research on US snakes (God bless Google!) - that's where I found the Copperhead, a pit viper found in and around the...
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    Steady on Lawrie old chap - I've finished all my...

    Steady on Lawrie old chap - I've finished all my reviews too you know! Granted they are not as verbose as your reviews... in fact, ashameably skimpy some of them... booohooo. So therefore, at your...
  18. Thread: ...on Friday.

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    Hi there again! Well, I didn't know the riddle -...

    Hi there again! Well, I didn't know the riddle - but for those that do, I'm sure it wouldn't detract from the script. Thing is, when you're 'lost' in a story (well when I'm lost in a story), I like...
  19. Thread: Fire Point

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    Hi there - gave feedback earlier and just re-read...

    Hi there - gave feedback earlier and just re-read your script. On 2nd read the long action sequences at the beginning and later in the script kind of add rather than detract, if you know what I mean....
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    Me again! I've just been reading what Bridget is...

    Me again! I've just been reading what Bridget is saying and agree that, yeh, your script could lend more to the visual element than read through.
    Good luck!
  21. Thread: Copperhead

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    Tim - thanks for all the advice - and the obvious...

    Tim - thanks for all the advice - and the obvious - so obvious that I forgot about it - putting in a title page... duh!

    Blaine, thankyou so much too, spending time to feedback on this ole...
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    Hi again! I'm re-reading some of the stuff I've...

    Hi again! I'm re-reading some of the stuff I've been giving out as feedback. Being a newby to this... still learning. Yes I agree with Blaine and Tim Collins - and a different title could change the...
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    Hi Rustom! Glad you are picking up those positive...

    Hi Rustom! Glad you are picking up those positive reviews!
  24. Thread: Covenant

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    Hi again Lawrie! I submitted my feedback on your...

    Hi again Lawrie! I submitted my feedback on your script earlier. Good to see you are recieving such rave reviews. Yup - or should I say - Aye - Covenant is in my 'fistful of favourites'...
  25. Thread: Whoring Streets

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    Hiya! Not sure where I am on this script. In...

    Hiya! Not sure where I am on this script. In reflective mode, on 1st read, the lengthy dialogues seemed okay. Sadly on 2nd read through, I'm surprised Buddy (last page) didn't grab the gun and shoot...
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