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  1. Thread: The Return

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    notes as i go... Blonde woman, huge house.....

    notes as i go...

    Blonde woman, huge house.. already feels like Hitchcock..

    is Jane delusional? they don't seem to know who she is..

    actually John seems to know something about what's...
  2. Thread: The Melt

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    mostly just missing commas, usually in action...

    mostly just missing commas, usually in action blocks, that make it tough to read smoothly the first time. i'm probably just being nit-picky..
  3. Thread: The Melt

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    cool poster.. (notes as i read) wow, great...

    cool poster..

    (notes as i read)

    wow, great start. 3 lines in and i'm intrigued.

    so FELIX is the man with the suit and wingtips. does this mean he's no longer hanging, or possibly this scene...
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    oh, and unique!

    oh, and unique!
  5. Thread: Trust

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    ok, thanks.. i didn't see the attraction, so i...

    ok, thanks.. i didn't see the attraction, so i guess you gotta show it a little more with their dialog and interactions.
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    true.

    true.
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    great title, Chris. i'm looking forward to...

    great title, Chris. i'm looking forward to reading this script.. here goes!

    good start, visually descriptive.

    ok, a clock-maker's dungeon and chained prisoner - i'm intrigued..

    i know you're...
  8. Thread: Trust

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    reading now, notes as i go.. nice, jumping...

    reading now, notes as i go..

    nice, jumping right into a car chase near a cliff.

    i'm not sure why HENRY needs ILIANA, but we'll see.

    so now he's letting her leave and go up the road to catch...
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    hello.. (notes as i read) scene one:...

    hello..

    (notes as i read)

    scene one: dialog is a little on-the-nose, but effective in quickly setting up a conflict.

    scene two: again, maybe a little too on-the-nose for me, but i guess TOM...
  10. Thread: Covenant

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    notes as i read the script: hey, this aint no...

    notes as i read the script:

    hey, this aint no western! where's the cowboys and indians! no whiskey either! haha sorry, just kidding. i'll keep reading now...

    very good writing so far. ambitious...
  11. Thread: Copperhead

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    notes as i read: "EXT. TUMBLEWEED SKITTERS...

    notes as i read:

    "EXT. TUMBLEWEED SKITTERS ACROSS A DUSTY PLAIN - DAY (1955)" - you've mixed description/action into your scene heading. easy fix...

    how is the bullet's caliber going to...
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    notes as i read: good start; nice description...

    notes as i read:

    good start; nice description of the landscape and the RIDER.

    wow he has quick hands, especially for someone who's weak and bloody. to catch a diamondback mid-strike is awesome,...
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    notes as i read... love the description of...

    notes as i read...

    love the description of ROOK CARVER.

    nice opening scene, good set-up. makes me want to keep reading.

    maybe let the conductor's dialog introduce CHARLIE LOWREY's identity,...
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    Sticky: ditto - i want to read/review/rate all the...

    ditto - i want to read/review/rate all the scripts before the deadline. :)
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    Sticky: haha ok, Woot! i won something!!

    haha ok, Woot! i won something!!
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    Sticky: congrats to all the moviemakers in the top 10. :)...

    congrats to all the moviemakers in the top 10. :)

    even though it was just random and i didn't actually "win" a copy of The DV Rebel's Guide, i am excited to have been chosen, and i am thankful...
  17. Acknowledging the Specific Achievements of Cast...

    Acknowledging the Specific Achievements of Cast and Crew:

    ACCEPTANCE.
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    well, i guess i can blame Lossfest. i really...

    well, i guess i can blame Lossfest. i really wanted to write a western, but i got too caught up in making and entering a film in dvxfest.

    i am looking forward to reading the scripts, though. good...
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    hey guys, the festival i mentioned above is a...

    hey guys, the festival i mentioned above is a great new addition to the film community here in the tampa bay area. i think it's the 3rd or 4th year now, and it is packed full of workshops and...
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    i might take the feedback i received in my film's...

    i might take the feedback i received in my film's thread, make some adjustments, and submit Take to a local festival. i'll have to wait a year though, because i believe the festival is going on...
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    i'm not sure if i reviewed your film yet, but i...

    i'm not sure if i reviewed your film yet, but i just wanted to stop by and say good job. pretty much what Zak said, actually. highest ranking from me, too. your film really resonated with me; i don't...
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    pay it forward... Norm, wanna share what...

    pay it forward...



    Norm, wanna share what you learned? :)
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    i really like the look and feel of your film, it...

    i really like the look and feel of your film, it really has excellent photography. from composition to lighting to editing, it was really a joy to watch.

    the first scene is very similar to the...
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    hey Jason, good work here. i thought you could...

    hey Jason, good work here. i thought you could have done a little more with it, but then again, you're in round 2! so what do i know?

    seriously though, sometimes less is more, and you really...
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    at this time, i would like to formally concede......

    at this time, i would like to formally concede... haha, thanks everyone for your feedback.

    Take is now up on vimeo right here: http://www.vimeo.com/3241886
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