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Congratulations to everyone! I learned a ton about screenwriting from reading the scripts entered, and they were all good, fun reads. :beer: :beer:

Zombie Nazis? No, I haven't heard about that one, but it sounds like a cool flick! :thumbup:

Good point on my characters, they did turn out to be similar.

My initial idea was that Buck would...

Thanks for all the nice reviews and feedback, folks!



Wow, thanks for the compliment! Maybe Buck and Paul will make a return in a future festival.



Thanks Nektonic, that is very...

Count me in the club. I've read them all and commented on them all. Good work everyone!

That was a great story, and the dialog was exceptional. Nice work doing your research to get all the correct phrases of the period. The ending was a bit of a letdown. But now that I've read your...

Oh man, that was a hoot! Poor Valor, talk about having a bad day.

I loved this line: "Sea gull feathers, powdered donuts, and fists all go flying in one giant cluster f**k" LMAO!

Good work!

That was a fun story with an unexpected ending (all the more fun).

I found it entirely unbelievable that Dan could make two phone calls and have Dorothy pin-pointed to her room number, but this...

That was a fun read! The jumps back and forth between past and present were a bit of a distraction while reading, but I'd think the would work fine in a film. I had some questions about the story but...

Cool concept, cool story. A battle of evil titans in an El Camino, with one equipped with a flame thrower. Oh, and a soggy lizard. It just doesn't get much better than that. :beer:

That was a fun read. I loved the twist at the end.

I wouldn't change a thing about how you introduce the fact that he has a wife (late in the story). As you have it, the twist is hard to forsee...

Oh yeah, superhuman Nazis -- humanity's worse nightmare!

I'm glad you liked the story, Jamie.

I loved the dialog in this one, it sounded like authentic early 40's gumshoe talk. It tentatively gets my #1 dialog award (tentatively because I have a few more to read). The e-Bay reference was...

That was a fun story!

I got confused for a moment here: "The man sees Cooper in the window and they lock eyes." Other than the title, that was the first mention of "Cooper". You might want to...

Wow, very creative. It's hard for me to give you any constructive feedback as I think you nailed it. Nice job, I can't wait for the series. :thumbup:

Nice script. An easy read and I never had to jump back to prior pages to understand what was going on.

Given that it's a pulp story, I thought the ending could have had a bit more bang in it (pun...

Thanks for the feedback!

I let my wife and mom read the script before submitting it, and my mom didn't get the point of the dream sequence either. I probably should have made it, and the later...

Thanks for the comment! I'm glad you got my "PG13 pulp" thing, that's what I was shooting for. Nothing sophisticated enough for Hollywood, but similar to something in a dog-eared 50's pulp magazine...

That was some wild and wacky stuff!

I liked it. A good ole fast paced pulp story with plenty of surreal violence. My kind of script! :thumbsup:

That was a fun read! Nice break from all the detective stories. The visuals were great, this story would look stunning on film.

The dialog struck me as a cleverly and deliberately written battle...

Nice one! Probably the best of the detective story scripts I've read so far. Good work!

As with all the others I've read, I didn't see the ending coming, so I enjoyed it that much more. I'm...

Good script and story. I liked how you jumped right into the shoot-em-up action in the first scene.

Like the other commenters, I was a little surprised that she left her brother behind in the...

Nice work, that was a very enjoyable read. The characters and their dialog fit perfectly for the period the story was set in. That alone immersed me.

The ending was good given that you explained...

Ahhhhhh.... No, I didn't get that. Now it makes perfect sense and I like the story even more! :thumbup:

I loved it!

I didn't see the ending coming at all, as I was sure the murderer was Leo Darren until the reveal at the end. It was a pleasant shocker for me when he pulled the mask off. Also, nice...

Nice story, and I really liked your descriptions of the setting and characters. They made it easy to form images in my mind.

I thought the ending might have been more powerful if you faded out as...