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    Star Wars Star Trek movies The Flight of the...

    Star Wars
    Star Trek movies
    The Flight of the Navigator
    The Last Starfighter
    Monster Squad
    The Addams Family
    Labyrinth
    Ghostbusters
    Legend
    Princess Bride
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    Sticky: Congratulations guys, much deserved.

    Congratulations guys, much deserved.
  3. Thread: Next fest

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    Psycho partner fest. Alien fest. Melancholy...

    Psycho partner fest.
    Alien fest.
    Melancholy fest.
    I see dead people fest
    sea fest
    Dessert fest
    Historic fest
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    Thanks for taking time to read and review CSetten.

    Thanks for taking time to read and review CSetten.
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    As always, thank you for your review and I agree...

    As always, thank you for your review and I agree with your comments.

    I always knew I wouldn't get it in without room for improvement.

    Thanks again.
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    Bill, thank you for taking your time to read and...

    Bill, thank you for taking your time to read and review. Most of what you said I totally agree with, but I disagree with your final statement of it reads more like a short story. Yes there are areas...
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    I have no problem with it. But on the other...

    I have no problem with it.

    But on the other side of the argument, I'm sure Chris knew this would be the case when he took the Script-keeper's post. Is it worth the arguments later?

    It's his...
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    I've finished

    That is, I've read all the competition scripts and have commented on them (if I have missed any, or anyone wants more clarification on a comment I made, then please let me know.)


    All I have left...
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    Hi Derek, Thanks for the read. Good; It is...

    Hi Derek,

    Thanks for the read.

    Good;
    It is based on a true story as I used to have those paralysed dream/wakes moments when I was younger. T'was horrible. But no Hag though.
    It's not a bad...
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    Hi ZellJr, Thanks for the read. The Good:...

    Hi ZellJr,

    Thanks for the read.

    The Good:
    Excellent idea.
    Good characters. I liked the goading of the others to Marley. Good dialogue.
    The twist is beautiful. I may not have understood it...
  11. Thread: Ruby

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    Hi Sunk99, Thanks for the read. Good: The...

    Hi Sunk99,

    Thanks for the read.

    Good:
    The story is set up well.
    The intricate details are very nicely done, like the door closing switching the lights on.
    The tension is built well with the...
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    Right, that's it, he's now called Chris Keaton...

    Right, that's it, he's now called Chris Keaton and his wife is called Edna Keaton!
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    Hi Darren, Thanks for the read. Good: This...

    Hi Darren,

    Thanks for the read.

    Good:
    This was a big idea. Kudos.
    Action was spaced well, but needs a little more work to get it tighter and fully understandable in each shot.
    Dialogue was...
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    Trapped in a dead city. Trapped behind enemy...

    Trapped in a dead city.
    Trapped behind enemy lines.
    Trapped with with an immobilising injury as his doom approaches.

    Your choice, pick one Sunk99.
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    Hi Derle, Thanks for the read. Good: The...

    Hi Derle,

    Thanks for the read.

    Good:
    The trapped is a good "think outside the box" take on it.
    The script message is very good.
    I really liked the class of the people, that they are...
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    Hi Heather, Thanks for the read. Good:...

    Hi Heather,

    Thanks for the read.

    Good:
    Great idea for trapped. It's a large trapped.
    He's left to die. Reminds me of "the needs of the many outweigh the needs of the few."
    Future guns. Nice....
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    Hi Michael, Thanks for the read. Good:...

    Hi Michael,

    Thanks for the read.

    Good:
    Nice twist to classic legends.
    I like the characters that you have created. I like that you have Tommy unable to form words.
    The tension is built up so...
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    Hi Pete, Thanks for the read. Good: Good...

    Hi Pete,

    Thanks for the read.

    Good:
    Good idea.
    I liked the idea of the old radio tuning into the mobile phones.
    I loved the anti-hollywood ending and the detonation.
    I liked the lady yellow...
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    Hi Dauthi, Thanks for the read. Good: I...

    Hi Dauthi,

    Thanks for the read.

    Good:
    I love Sci-Fi.
    Good trapped idea. I liked the cell and the purpose of his incarceration.
    I liked the creature scurrying in the dark cell and the cocoon...
  20. Thread: Hope Chest

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    Hi movie, thanks for the read. Good: Good...

    Hi movie, thanks for the read.

    Good:
    Good idea. I liked how she was trapped.
    I loved the anti-hollywood ending.
    I like the message of the script.
    A good trapped idea. Horrible to have it...
  21. Thread: Homeroom

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    Hi Taylormade, thanks for the read. Good: The...

    Hi Taylormade, thanks for the read.

    Good:
    The twist got me, well done.
    Simple to make, two locations. 4 main actors and two to be bodies.
    Simple idea.
    Flowed reasonably well.

    Not so good:...
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    Hi Zelljr, I just wanted to reply and say, you...

    Hi Zelljr,

    I just wanted to reply and say, you got it. That last paragraph is exactly what I was trying to achieve. Your choice! Every decision is up to you. What are they, when did he get bit,...
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    Hi Sean, Thanks for the read. Good: The...

    Hi Sean,

    Thanks for the read.

    Good:
    The overall idea is good, if a little confusing.
    I liked the characters. Especially Paul and Michael.
    The healing and the bullet wounds are good....
  24. Thread: Glued

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    Hi Rustom, As always mate, a good read....

    Hi Rustom,

    As always mate, a good read. Thanks.

    Good:
    Good characters.
    Goos trapped situation.
    Nice little twist about the kid and the cartoons.
    Kudos for the research into dialogue, and...
  25. Thread: Blessed

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    Hi Erich, Thanks for the read. Good: Well...

    Hi Erich,

    Thanks for the read.

    Good:
    Well written. Especially your dialogue.
    Good characters.
    Beautiful depth into relationships for a short.
    Some research was necessary for this, so Kudos....
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