I have a great idea for this one. It's called 'Korgon'
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05-03-2012, 04:58 PM
Thread: ScriptFest XII: AlienFest
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I have a great idea for this one. It's called...
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04-27-2012, 10:22 AM
Thread: And the winners are!!!
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dtroop506 hehe I'll have to find an excuse to end...
dtroop506 hehe I'll have to find an excuse to end up there - thanks :)
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04-26-2012, 04:55 PM
Thread: And the winners are!!!
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Oh WOW!! Thanks everyone!! This made my day. :)...
Oh WOW!! Thanks everyone!! This made my day. :) Congrats to all - especially stoked to have won in such great company x
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04-26-2012, 03:32 PM
Thread: Next Fest!
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FutureFest - set in the future
MuteFest - no...
FutureFest - set in the future
MuteFest - no dialogue
FairytaleFest- scripts have to de adaptations of fairytales
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04-22-2012, 04:25 AM
Thread: Youth
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Ok cool yeah I really like that premise - just...
Ok cool yeah I really like that premise - just maybe there are some leftover remnants from your original idea still in there that could be cleared out. Or just make it a teeny bit more obvious. It's...
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04-22-2012, 04:23 AM
Thread: Dad's Famous Bedtime Stories
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Hehe Helen Keller in a library - it could be very...
Hehe Helen Keller in a library - it could be very touching :P And you're very welcome! I really enjoyed your script and hey - writing descriptions is easy - writing dialogue is tough so you've got...
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04-21-2012, 05:57 PM
Thread: Youth
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There's a lot I like about this. The set-up is...
There's a lot I like about this. The set-up is good. The tension between the two characters is great. We really feel for Amber and we're sucked into (pardon the pun) the mystery which is foreshadowed...
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04-21-2012, 05:45 PM
Thread: Sproink
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Ooh I love this, unsurprisingly. I'm such a fan...
Ooh I love this, unsurprisingly. I'm such a fan of your writing Rustom. You are reliably excellent - such a light touch. I think the highest compliment anyone can give a script is that they haven't...
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04-21-2012, 05:21 PM
Thread: The Ruby of Rangoon
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I'm sure you made mistakes and broke rules...
I'm sure you made mistakes and broke rules somewhere in this but I didn't notice any of it because I was busy enjoying the story :) So, that has to be a good sign! I'm a sucker for these types of...
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04-21-2012, 05:09 PM
Thread: Platinum Phantom # 1
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Smart making all the other kids mannequins so...
Smart making all the other kids mannequins so that you're left with just the two characters! I like how surreal this is - reminds me of kids TV shows in the 90s when they were a lot odder. BUT it...
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04-21-2012, 04:53 PM
Thread: Legends never die
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Nice story - I always love the dynamics between...
Nice story - I always love the dynamics between grandparents and grandkids. You set the mood very well and it's very clear that you're 'writing what you know'.
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04-21-2012, 04:36 PM
Thread: Dad's Famous Bedtime Stories
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I really enjoyed this one a lot! Great dialogue -...
I really enjoyed this one a lot! Great dialogue - lots of personality and humour - and although it's not entirely naturalistic I think that suits the mood. The style is consistent and that's what...
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04-21-2012, 04:27 PM
Thread: Age Of Reason - Chris Keaton
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Well! Chris I do believe you've made me think :)...
Well! Chris I do believe you've made me think :) I like this a lot - the metaphorical sci-fi stuff is right up my alley. You established your conflict right bam at the beginning and carried it...
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04-15-2012, 05:01 PM
Thread: Zorgon
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Oh and thanks re: the numbers - didn't know that.
Oh and thanks re: the numbers - didn't know that.
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04-15-2012, 05:00 PM
Thread: Zorgon
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Thanks all for reading and commenting!
Ha!...
Thanks all for reading and commenting!
Ha! Oops - I would never have even thought of that. Man, I forget how different our lingo is! Maybe now Sherlock and Doctor Who are so big over there our... -
04-12-2012, 05:36 AM
Thread: Zorgon
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Thanks Darren. Mom and Mum aren't different...
Thanks Darren. Mom and Mum aren't different spellings - they are different words. And lots of Irish kids call their folks Mom now thanks to the pervasive American influence. And doh - was it supposed...
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04-07-2012, 09:44 AM
Thread: ScriptFest XI: FamilyFest
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It's a lot harder to sustain two characters in...
It's a lot harder to sustain two characters in one room for 100 pages than for 6, dude :P
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04-07-2012, 08:57 AM
Thread: Zorgon
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Yeah I've seen The Road :P
How about...
Yeah I've seen The Road :P
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04-07-2012, 06:35 AM
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Teehee Anthony you're right. I'm the Bellatrix...
Teehee Anthony you're right. I'm the Bellatrix Lestrange to his Voldemort :P
Less characters! More rules!!
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04-06-2012, 07:55 AM
Thread: ScriptFest XI: FamilyFest
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Believe me if you're ever tasked to write a...
Believe me if you're ever tasked to write a script for a producer they'll have approximately one million percent more restrictions on ya. Restrictions force you to be creative - I think it's good to...
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04-06-2012, 07:52 AM
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Aww well I enjoyed it. Free reign is for the...
Aww well I enjoyed it. Free reign is for the weak! I love me some parameters.
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04-05-2012, 05:24 PM
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You brought this on yourself, Keaton ;)
You brought this on yourself, Keaton ;)
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04-05-2012, 11:40 AM
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Done! Good luck all!
Done! Good luck all!
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03-27-2012, 04:01 PM
Thread: Legends never die
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Nice poster!
Nice poster!
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03-27-2012, 04:00 PM
Thread: Age Of Reason - Chris Keaton
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I'm suitably intrigued!
I'm suitably intrigued!
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