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That's awesome, man. I'm sure it was a great experience. Love the pics.

I thought the movie was a blast. There were some logical plot holes, but it was so charming I didn't really care. I'm a huge Nicholas Hoult fan from his days on Skins. Where in the film does Berg...

Thanks for the detailed breakdown. Can you share how long the process took (especially post-production)?

I appreciate your response to my comment, and I offer this not really as a rebuttal, but just as further clarification of my point of view.

I have several thoughts on this matter, and they combine...

Favorite Thing: "Any other good news?" along with the snarky dialogue of the computer in regards to her name. I'm not won over by CG, but I appreciate some good dialogue.

Least Favorite Thing: The...

First film to watch this fest.

Favorite Thing: the whispered narration. That was a strong and unusual choice, especially since it was only used for a specific section of the film. It would have...

I have to admit, I wasn't a huge fan of episodes 1 & 2, but 3 & 4 have been much better. I'm genuinely involved now.

Hey guys! Great to hear from both of you. I'm about to fly to a wedding for the weekend, but I'll get back to both of you as soon as I get back. (Or maybe even while I'm there, if I have time).

Thanks Dustin. Now if there were only some other Dallas DVXusers who wanted to play, I could be back in the game.

Thanks mookid, that's a great compliment.

Thanks everyone who commented for all the comments and suggestions. I'll definitely take everyone's thoughts into account when revising.

I really liked the football scene. Very sweet and emotional. I got the twist very early. Probably doesn't help that this is the last script I read, and a similar twist appeared in at least two other...

Really compelling story. The writing, in the beginning especially, is a bit clumsy, and the formatting (names, flashbacks) needs some fixing. But there's a lot of interesting action and twists. I...

This was a really nice, personal feeling story. Whether or not it was drawn from real life, it feels that way, and that's always good. I wonder why you don't want the father's face seen? This made me...

I liked this a lot, but was a little thrown by the very end. Because we don't see her sneaking the kite back in or anything, there's definitely the possibility that it's the ghost of the father or...

I was wondering if it was from something else. I assumed you wouldn't quote Green Day in a Depression piece. I searched Google to see if anything else came up, but after 3 pages of Green Day and...

White Snake has a similar lyric too:

"An' here I go again on my own
Goin' down the only road I've ever known,
Like a drifter I was born to walk alone"

But Green Day's is:

"I walk a lonely...

I really liked this. Nice twist (and I don't like twists generally). I especially like the powerful punch the ending packs, with the father joining his family on their long walk.

Besides the typos...

Wow, that was a really pleasant surprise. Very rich and detailed. Everything was specific. So specific there was almost an arbitrariness to it. Like, why a sushi chef? But I think the arbitrariness...

Hey guys. I just moved to Dallas from NYC, and I'm still getting settled, but I'd love to enter ScareFest. If you don't know me, I've entered a number of these before, and had pretty good success...

I liked this a lot, Chris. I'm a sucker for this kind of sci-fi drama thing. It reminds me of Frequency.

"Tears well in Phil’s eyes.

PHIL
This was my father’s last experiment.
(beat)
He...

Most of the formatting/grammar notes seem to have been given, but I was thrown by the wife seeming to be introduced three times, as WOMAN, WIFE, and SHEILA. I thought maybe they were different women,...

I really liked the opening imagery here with the fish tank. I wish there was some more of that visual imagery throughout the screenplay, as it gets pretty talky.

I like how the confused looks of...

Thanks guys for the good technical feedback. Always appreciated. And I'm glad you both enjoyed it. I just downloaded your scripts and will probably get to them and your feedback tomorrow.

Nevermind. Third time's the charm. There was a firewall preventing the upload, so when I fixed that it worked.