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  1. Thread: Copperhead

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    Hi Jamiejay! Thanks for the feedback. Now......

    Hi Jamiejay! Thanks for the feedback.
    Now... Willard's Dad was the soldier who shot the deserter in the WW2 scene, and Raef's Dad was the soldier who tried to talk the deserter into coming back......
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    Hi Preston - thanks for the feedback, and yeh,...

    Hi Preston - thanks for the feedback, and yeh, all true - except the 'choppy dialogue' bit, disagree on that. As you rightly say, p. 3 bookish and that's because I write short stories / and mystery...
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    Thanks Rustom for the advice - and explained in a...

    Thanks Rustom for the advice - and explained in a way that I can understand. This first script has been a huge learning experience for me. Before going on to write another script, I'll be making...
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    Mark C - thanks for the feedback on my script....

    Mark C - thanks for the feedback on my script. Being Scottish, I had to research on US snakes (God bless Google!) - that's where I found the Copperhead, a pit viper found in and around the...
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    Tim - thanks for all the advice - and the obvious...

    Tim - thanks for all the advice - and the obvious - so obvious that I forgot about it - putting in a title page... duh!

    Blaine, thankyou so much too, spending time to feedback on this ole...
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    Conlan - thanks! And no, nothing you - or any of...

    Conlan - thanks! And no, nothing you - or any of you people of the Forum for that matter, have to say will be taken negatively... and if I change my mind about this , I have kept a stash of chocolate...
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    Sarah, thanks for the feed-back! Yes, this is the...

    Sarah, thanks for the feed-back! Yes, this is the first time I've written a script ever and am trying to get the hang of Final Draft software . Was talked into entering by my son -'Mother', he said,...
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    Hi Tim, thanks for the thumbsup on snakes - all...

    Hi Tim, thanks for the thumbsup on snakes - all this a bit new to me - script writing AND forums that is!!! Good Luck

    Hi Arroway... perhaps I should have left the ol' serpent handling to you! I'm...
  9. Thread: Copperhead

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    Copperhead

    Hi! My tale involves the Serpent Handlers of the Appalachians... and some BAAAAAD family history.
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