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    Sticky: I have some family obligations today that are...

    I have some family obligations today that are going to keep me from finishing, but have an idea (and a few scenes) that I'm liking. I'll try to get it finished up and post it for people to read and...
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    Sticky: Have an idea. You guys are fine with the 3 B's...

    Have an idea. You guys are fine with the 3 B's right - blasphemy, bestiality, and babes? Because it wouldn't be a party without them.
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    Sticky: OK, December 8th. I'd better get writing!

    OK, December 8th. I'd better get writing!
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    Dying is easy. Comedy is hard. Especially when it...

    Dying is easy. Comedy is hard. Especially when it involves Private Dicks (of the trench coat variety), or President Dicks (of the Nixon variety).
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    Sticky: I like it. Love the name. One of these actresses...

    I like it. Love the name. One of these actresses could be my Anna Karina.

    I also had a thought, which I sent to Chris, about a Craigslist missed connections. Each participant finds a CL post from...
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    Sticky: I second that three cheers for Alex! In fact I'm...

    I second that three cheers for Alex! In fact I'm very grateful for all of the comments - on my scripts and on the scripts of all of the other writers. It's been a tremendous learning experience....
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    Thanks guys. I'm buried in production ughh so...

    Thanks guys. I'm buried in production ughh so it's nice to hear something good and positive. There were some great scripts entered, including yours EBS which was my fave!
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    Whew. OK. Back somewhat among the land of the...

    Whew. OK. Back somewhat among the land of the living. To answer your questions:

    Fi was already curled up, but I like your thought of her curling up when Ta approaches. It shows something about...
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    Thanks Alex. I really appreciate the comments -...

    Thanks Alex. I really appreciate the comments - they will help me improve this. I especially like your thoughts on the money - this was a missed opportunity on my part and it's one that I will...
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    Yes, I was able to spend a little time yesterday...

    Yes, I was able to spend a little time yesterday working on the longer version of the script which will define Ta's motivation a lot more. It's been fun developing the "bad guy" - Fi's cousin....
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    Thank you conlanforever. thank And Alex,...

    Thank you conlanforever.
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    And Alex, WOW...this is fantastic, detailed feedback. I love it. Thank you so much and I can hardly wait to read the rest. Should we ever run into one another, I owe...
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    A Clockwork Darkened. Great title. I'm going to...

    A Clockwork Darkened. Great title. I'm going to have to take a read!
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    The drug angle worked for me, but I suspect it...

    The drug angle worked for me, but I suspect it could have worked a little harder. There is something intriguing about the notion of an alien race needing humans to take some organic substance to...
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    dtroop506 - One of the things I really like...

    dtroop506 -

    One of the things I really like about these fests is the learning opportunity they provide. Your notes were really great and even though I wasn't the writer of this script, I learned...
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    Lord, I love bo*bies! OK, that out of the way....

    Lord, I love bo*bies! OK, that out of the way. Fun read. Nice quality of being "artificial" (no pun intended) in the way the characters spoke, the improbable "love" at the end, etc. You were...
  16. Thread: Transmission

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    Our daughter's art teacher once told a group of...

    Our daughter's art teacher once told a group of us parents that when we critique our children's work, we should't simply say "I like it." Rather, we should point out details: "I like that brush...
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    OK, cool. I'll re-read it with that and your...

    OK, cool. I'll re-read it with that and your notes in mind. I think there's a lot of good stuff going on here...

    Love that phrase "punter brain"

    C
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    OK, lots of great reviews. I want to let you guys...

    OK, lots of great reviews. I want to let you guys know each and every one is very much appreciated. They help make me a better writer. Also, they (and reading other scripts in the fest) provided a...
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    OK. This is helpful. I can now re-read this with...

    OK. This is helpful. I can now re-read this with the CliffsNotes :-)

    And just so I've got it right, the "elevator pitch" (damn, I sort of hate that phrase, but it works here):

    Aliens have...
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    WARNING: CONTAINS SPOILERS. DO NOT READ IF YOU...

    WARNING: CONTAINS SPOILERS. DO NOT READ IF YOU HAVEN'T READ THE SCRIPT!!!





    There's a 1960s experimental film called La Jetee (dir: Chris Marker) that I've always loved. It has a fantastic...
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    Thanks Chris and Taylormade. I really appreciate...

    Thanks Chris and Taylormade. I really appreciate the comments. One of the things - perhaps the main thing, after showers of unadulterated praise - that I had hoped to get out of submitting this is...
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    OK weird. The word F*ck just turned into poo poo....

    OK weird. The word F*ck just turned into poo poo. What are we, five years old?
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    Loved the ending. A line or two that twists...

    Loved the ending. A line or two that twists everything. Thought the descriptions were good, painted a nice picture, and most of the dialog felt more-or-less right.

    This was a fantastic bit of...
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    Thanks King! I really appreciate the feedback. It...

    Thanks King! I really appreciate the feedback. It was a fun one to write (despite having to leave out a lot). It was somewhat challenging to figure out just how much to describe, especially with the...
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    I get maybe 36 or so words in and read the names...

    I get maybe 36 or so words in and read the names of the first two characters and love it already....
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