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    I agree. I was having fun too. :(

    I agree. I was having fun too. :(
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    I liked this, but I didn't really get why the dad...

    I liked this, but I didn't really get why the dad would take the blame for him and spend the rest of his life in jail when it was an accident. The writing was good though, and I did like it. Great...
  3. Thread: The Melt

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    oooh...I don't know why but I'm so creeped out by...

    oooh...I don't know why but I'm so creeped out by the shoes. I'm tossing my red stilettos now! Great visual.
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    This was well-written and it kept my attention...

    This was well-written and it kept my attention throughout. It actually felt like a scene from a longer movie. Nice work. :)
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    Ok, so I really liked this one too. I was a...

    Ok, so I really liked this one too. I was a little confused in the beginning with Jane and Vera, but I realized toward the end that you wanted us to be...so, very well done. I also really liked how...
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    Hey, I like a lot. I just don't really like a...

    Hey, I like a lot. I just don't really like a lot. ;p
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    I really want to know what the object was! :) But...

    I really want to know what the object was! :) But why did he not have his own car? I could have used more information and action. It is a good idea for a story though. I liked it. :)
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    I agree with Anthony. I also love a good kill....

    I agree with Anthony. I also love a good kill. Hitchcock wasn't always one for a happy ending anyway.
  9. Thread: Trust

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    I was confused about the two endings. I see what...

    I was confused about the two endings. I see what you were trying to do now, but it didn't make sense to me at the time and it kinda took me out of the story. Also, how did the teenage girl end up...
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    I like this one. Very well done. Like others have...

    I like this one. Very well done. Like others have said, I wasn't sure who all the characters were at times, but it didn't take away too much from the story, in my opinion. I still liked it. And I...
  11. Thread: The Bells

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    It reminded me of signs. I like that the ufo had...

    It reminded me of signs. I like that the ufo had bells. There were points where I was confused, but it made sense in the end. I think I understand the concept of a MacGuffin. Was the MacGuffin the...
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    but i still liked it. and it must be hard to...

    but i still liked it. and it must be hard to include very much action in such a short script. the ending was good. :)
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    Oh my god. I think I stumbled into the St....

    Oh my god. I think I stumbled into the St. Paddy's thread. :grin:
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    it just felt repetitive. i know you were building...

    it just felt repetitive. i know you were building tension, but it came to a point where i was starting to lose interest. more action was needed in the middle in my opinion.
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    Great twist, and pretty impressive considering...

    Great twist, and pretty impressive considering English is not your first language.
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    so, giving away the voodoo necklace thingy caused...

    so, giving away the voodoo necklace thingy caused the people to commit suicide and haunt the person they gave the necklace to? or am i way off?

    i thought the cop should have known it wasn't...
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    Sticky: I've been meaning to get on this for years. Guess...

    I've been meaning to get on this for years. Guess now's as good of a time to start as any.
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    this was pretty good, but it did seem like you...

    this was pretty good, but it did seem like you dragged it out a little... still, vengeful 10-year-olds are always fun...
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    So frickin' entertaining. I really liked it, and...

    So frickin' entertaining. I really liked it, and I don't really like much.
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    honestly, i was confused... it wasn't clear to me...

    honestly, i was confused... it wasn't clear to me how he was cheating? was it a trick knife?

    it was intriguing, but i got lost...
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    Here she is!!! David, I really loved your...

    Here she is!!!

    David, I really loved your film. The only part I really didn't care for was that horrible dancer.
    What ditch did you pull her out of?
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