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Ahhhhh. Gotcha.

Busy is good. It's certainly paying off. Keep it up.
I just call it like I see it, glad it was helpful.

What's 'Bloodfest'?

Thanks for the compliments and suggestions!

Super clean writing. Definitely had some funny in there.
My only suggestion is to really delve into that character trate thing and trick out your guys. Since it's not really plot driven, you could...

Thanks man. Much appreciated feedback.

I never said Heaven or Hell... You did! ;p muhahahahaha!

Hey Darren. Since there are so few of us, I'm doing extended reviews. Here goes...

Overall, I get the stressed out, under appreciated, over worked elf and his mates who let loose, have a little...

Damn. Your writing has improved MEGA since the last thing of yours I read. Nice going. Hey, I dug this story a lot.
It's really bent. I think the ending needs to be more of a homerun.

The gag...

I thought the idea of the twist was funny as hell. The execution left a little to be desired, in terms of the end...
You have this very visual story and we are putting all the pieces together and...

You got my review. I'd will say, this was my kinda Holiday party.
When's the next one? I have someone I like to invite....

Thanks for the read. Here's my retort.

The main claim here is that you didn't understand what's happening and that the piece lacks stucture. A fair claim.

But, through speculation, you...

HOLIDAY CHEER

"Join us to celebrate the Holiday"

READ IT: HERE

THREAD: HERE


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READ IT HERE: HOLIDAY CHEER

Just a quick thanks to all who sent me reviews.
They were all very helpful and insightful. :thumbsup:

Just lay it on me man. That's the fun.
They don't ask the Iron Chef what she wants to cook. They say...

"Here's 1,000 lbs of squid. Make it delicious."

My only suggestion is to never take...

I just realized Keaton can see how we all vote now that he's el hefe...
Hmmm, remind me to stop giving you all 1s and me 10s... It's not working anyway. Keaton is BIG BROTHER Now... he's watching...

YW. Sounds good. Let the reading begin.

Welcome to Thunderdome... (always wanted to use that)

Carrie - A warm hearted mother daughter drama...

I take a 'Crying Game Shower' after I do my taxes every year.
Except, I cry WAY louder.

Robert Duvall delivered, but it was a tear jerking, long walk off a short pier, IMNSHO.

Yeah, Xylophone is to my 'Z' rule as Y is to vowels. It's just allowed in because it's cool.

Simplicity works. It's one of the most challenging techniques to master.
I went minimal on this one. I know I didn't come anywhere close to 'mastering' anything, but it is simple...

Your feature...

Well your premise has my gears turning...

Cannibal Holocaust
Happiness
Battle Royale
Pretty Baby
The Crying Game
Flowers of Flesh and Blood
Slumber Party Massacre
Motel Hell
Nekromantik
Eraserhead

The commitment police have been dispatched... ;p

That title is BADASS!

Stop getting better at making posters. What will you need me for then? Don't answer that...

A family that is destroyed together, probably won't stay together... just saying. It's physics... ;p
I love words that start with Z as a side note, except Zima.