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    Congratulations to the winners and to everyone!

    Congratulations to the winners and to everyone!
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    That's a good suggestion. Thanks! :beer:

    That's a good suggestion. Thanks! :beer:
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    Have you seen hospital nurses wield needles? ...

    Have you seen hospital nurses wield needles? They're like ninjas with those things! No matter how much you struggle or how much bigger you are than a nurse, you're going down if she has a needle. ...
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    I don't want to beat a dead horse, but I want to...

    I don't want to beat a dead horse, but I want to say one more thing on this subject. It's not about skilled post production. It's about skilled pre production. The best example I have is the...
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    Would you have said the same thing about a...

    Would you have said the same thing about a futuristic office building where a guy gets blown through the wall? Or a post apocalyptic John Ford-style western landscape after a second civil war? Or an...
  6. Thread: High Roller

    by krestofre
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    I think your writing style is very good. I...

    I think your writing style is very good. I didn't feel that the script was wordy or overly descriptive or anything. I felt it was appropriate and never while I was reading did I think "this needs...
  7. I think on average I rated scripts higher this...

    I think on average I rated scripts higher this fest than any previous scriptfest. Excellent turn out this time!
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    I liked this one a lot. The only way I think it...

    I liked this one a lot. The only way I think it could be improved is if you painted Aiden with as much desperation as you tell me he has. In fact the only way I know he's desperate is because the...
  9. Thread: 99%

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    You handled writing the suspense well. It's an...

    You handled writing the suspense well. It's an exciting script!

    It feels like it ended too soon or too late. I think the script would be stronger if you left it more ambiguous, or if you gave us...
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    I am glad that I'm not the only one who...

    I am glad that I'm not the only one who approached horror in more ... um ... I don't know. Human terms. Maybe? The horror here is derived from the question of how could a human being do that to...
  11. Thread: Mind Games

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    I feel like I missed something. I really liked...

    I feel like I missed something. I really liked this script. The story held me. The descriptions of the locations and people were very well imagined. The twist got me.

    What I didn't understand...
  12. Thread: I...Win

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    Well that was creepy. And not just the ending,...

    Well that was creepy. And not just the ending, but genuinely creepy throughout.

    You know how to write a script and I could find no flaw in the mechanics of it. Instead of a critique so to...
  13. Thread: High Roller

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    This is the second script of yours that I've had...

    This is the second script of yours that I've had the pleasure to read and both of them have impressed me. You write well. I can tell that thought and craft and effort go into what you write.
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    I think the real strength of this script is in...

    I think the real strength of this script is in the location and set design. Little touches that you added were terrific like the poker game being lighted with old flashlights. I can just see that...
  15. Thread: GPS

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    I completely agree with Egg Born Son on this one....

    I completely agree with Egg Born Son on this one. Your writing is tight yet descriptive and it flows like a script should flow.

    I also agree that I didn't get the "Game over..." text message. ...
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    As far as the story is concerned, I think you're...

    As far as the story is concerned, I think you're perfectly fine. It's interesting. It moves along. It's definitely horror. All good and enjoyable. Excellent work!

    For me, the formatting and...
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    Sticky: Congrats to everyone! Thanks for a great fest.

    Congrats to everyone! Thanks for a great fest.
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    Surgeon's Game

    Logline: A promising surgeon's life is permanently altered after he is invited to an exclusive game played by hospital staff.

    I recently had surgery for the first time and I'm exorcising some...
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    True story: A friend of mine called me up one...

    True story: A friend of mine called me up one day and said "Drive over here, I've got a film idea to tell you about." So I did. We got in his old beat up farm truck and started driving through the...
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    Agreed. Great title! I've got to get me one...

    Agreed. Great title!

    I've got to get me one of these threads. :)
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    You've got room tone down. Be sure it's the room...

    You've got room tone down. Be sure it's the room you're filming in and be sure that your actors are present. An empty room sounds different than a room with people in it who are quiet. Strange, but...
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    Audio recorder was a Fostex FR2LE which is a nice...

    Audio recorder was a Fostex FR2LE which is a nice little Compact Flash recording unit. Terrible Headphone preamp, but the audio signal that's actually recorded to the card is one of the cleanest...
  23. Thread: (En)Listless

    by krestofre
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    Sure, I can do that. I think the reason that...

    Sure, I can do that.

    I think the reason that I failed to connect with the piece is that I was simultaneously watching it and trying to figure it out. Looking back I get the personification of...
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    Most of my thoughts have been covered. I'll add...

    Most of my thoughts have been covered. I'll add that it bothered me a little bit that the drug had no name. It was just the "little white pill." Coming up with some sort of street name would have...
  25. Thread: Alone

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    Your CGI skills are way more than mine will ever...

    Your CGI skills are way more than mine will ever be. And it says a lot that you took such a difficult path for your fest entry. Very well done on that note alone. There were a few CGI moments that...
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