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    SHORT: Dropped: Short film

    Dropped: A short film i wrote and directed earlier this year.

    Dropped the story of Robby a student who drops out of College, and meets a girl he jokingly tells he is a professor. When Sara takes...
  2. SHORT: Very powerful thanks for telling this story. ...

    Very powerful thanks for telling this story. well done
  3. SHORT: I enjoyed this a lot. Acting seemed pretty good,...

    I enjoyed this a lot. Acting seemed pretty good, and you conveyed some decent emotion. THe sound was in and out, a bit of a turn off was some of your worst sound was at the very begining which...
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    SHORT: I had a hard time staying tuned in. I think you...

    I had a hard time staying tuned in. I think you could edit the story to run a lot more easily in about half the time. There are some parts that just run a little long, and i only made it about 1/3...
  5. Thread: Experimento

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    SHORT: some nice shots, DOF was a little thin, but i...

    some nice shots, DOF was a little thin, but i guess could be an artistic choice for the feel you were going for. I htink you successfully created an eerie sort of atmosphere, could have used some...
  6. SHORT: I really liked it, interesting actors, good short...

    I really liked it, interesting actors, good short story, kept it moving and didnt make it to long.

    I would have liked a rolling downhill shot, but no biggie.

    Keep up the good work.
  7. Thread: SHORT: Tick Tock

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    SHORT: Caught it, it seemed a little repetative, not...

    Caught it, it seemed a little repetative, not enough varrying of shots, and a bit long.

    I think it would flow better if you cut several minutes off. I had a hard time staying tuned it.

    Good...
  8. SHORT: Really enjoyed this film. Perfect blend of story...

    Really enjoyed this film. Perfect blend of story and effects, and effects as a means of telling a story, not just a story to showcase effects.

    After thinking about it, I've decided to feature...
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    OTHER: Cool tutorial, thanks for taking the time to...

    Cool tutorial, thanks for taking the time to share with the community and make us all better.

    I decided to share your tutorial on my blog here

    http://jone5films.wordpress.com/

    keep them...
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    SHORT: I really enjoyed this, great shooting, great...

    I really enjoyed this, great shooting, great action shots, beautifully choreographed scenes. I have not seen action like this ever outside of a big budget film, i am very impressed.

    The story is...
  11. Thread: Turning Silver

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    SHORT: The one shot i noticed exposure was wonky is when...

    The one shot i noticed exposure was wonky is when he walks out side, (this is really tough, and i was thinking of how i would have handled it and im not sure i even have an answer, maybe someone with...
  12. Thread: Turning Silver

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    SHORT: Not to bad, i think you could have trimmed it a...

    Not to bad, i think you could have trimmed it a little, the beginning starts a little slow for me, maybe take 40 - 60 secs and should flow better.

    You had some nice shots, nice job nailing...
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    SHORT: Nice job overall, i didnt like it as much as the...

    Nice job overall, i didnt like it as much as the last one you did, the one with the robot kid. I think the story could have been a little tighter, there were times i wasnt sure what was going on...
  14. SHORT: I enjoyed it a lot, very nice editing all around....

    I enjoyed it a lot, very nice editing all around. I would have liked a little more of a story arc, but i guess it wasnt that kind of piece. Nice job keeping it fairly short and sweet, any longer...
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    SHORT: did you have to pay for the copilot fx?

    did you have to pay for the copilot fx?
  16. OTHER: i might be game, im looking for original music. ...

    i might be game, im looking for original music.

    I have a rough cut of my film i can shoot you if you want.
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    SHORT: I really loved the chilling atmostphere you...

    I really loved the chilling atmostphere you manage to great here. Great use of lighting and sound to convey this. Shots were all nicely designed, and also a great use of DOF and moving your subject...
  18. Thread: "dog"

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    SHORT: Enjoyed this very much, i think the first few...

    Enjoyed this very much, i think the first few minutes could be shortened a bit to help it flow a little better, but overall excellent work.

    From the composition, to the camera movement to the...
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    SHORT: Great job. Satire isnt really my genre, but so...

    Great job. Satire isnt really my genre, but so many "film/drama nerds" love to do it and they often dont realize that what they think is funny rarely is at all. So good job on actually writing...
  20. Thread: Man-eater

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    SHORT: Funny little story. Some of the lighting and...

    Funny little story. Some of the lighting and composition could have been better but i will echo what dre said its super hard to direct yourself especially if you had a small crew.

    Nice sound...
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    MUSIC VIDEO: wow tough crowd. I think you had some nice...

    wow tough crowd. I think you had some nice shots, some of the framed things werent my favorites, and you could have maybe used some better lighting, but it seemed to sort of match the type of...
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    SHORT: I was going to say at first it doesnt look...

    I was going to say at first it doesnt look particularly great, but for being 11 years old when we didnt have access to great equipment back then its not to bad.

    I didnt find it particularly funny,...
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    SHORT: got a trailer?

    got a trailer?
  24. SHORT: After some more thought, I like this film so much...

    After some more thought, I like this film so much I've decided to feature it on my blog as the Short Film of the Week. You join the ranks of some very talented film makers. From indie wonders to the...
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    SHORT: Some decent shots. You had some exposure...

    Some decent shots. You had some exposure troubles (easy to do on a sunny day). I think you could edit it down to about 3 mins and it would flow a lot better.

    Reminds me of some of the shorts i...
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