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    Hey it's OK to dream big sometimes :cheesy:

    Hey it's OK to dream big sometimes :cheesy:
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    Thanks, Khamanna. Your piece was excellent as...

    Thanks, Khamanna. Your piece was excellent as well. I agree there were a LOT of great scripts. It would be nice if someone filmed them!
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    Thanks, man! That means a lot, since I admire...

    Thanks, man! That means a lot, since I admire your work.
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    Wow :cheesy: Third place is such an honour when...

    Wow :cheesy: Third place is such an honour when there were so many outstanding scripts in this fest!!!

    Again, thank you guys for having this fest and getting me to write something halfway serious...
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    Sticky: Not yet, as far as I can tell.

    Not yet, as far as I can tell.
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    Yeah, we had absent fathers... maybe crazy...

    Yeah, we had absent fathers... maybe crazy mothers!
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    I like that! :cheesy:

    I like that! :cheesy:
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    Sticky: Gotcha :cheesy:

    Gotcha :cheesy:
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    Sticky: Does that mean we are supposed to vote on our own...

    Does that mean we are supposed to vote on our own script?
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    Sticky: So many awesome scripts! :cheesy: Thanks for...

    So many awesome scripts! :cheesy:

    Thanks for holding this killer festival (and forcing me to write something at least halfway serious for once).
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    Oh man, yeah I know what you mean. There's no way...

    Oh man, yeah I know what you mean. There's no way that image could ever leave a person.

    And that's awful about the government not paying your friend's insurance... He lost his hand for crying out...
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    I agree, and I should have mentioned that. At the...

    I agree, and I should have mentioned that. At the time I was too busy wondering if the little girl was a ghost.
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    Thanks, Mobie and Simon! Simon, I meant the...

    Thanks, Mobie and Simon!

    Simon, I meant the "innit" as a rhetorical question or emphasis... "It's not racist if it's true, isn't that so?"... "She found him, right?" (Because she's a hooker.)...
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    Hey hey Pisan! Heh, I didn't know that! :cheesy:...

    Hey hey Pisan! Heh, I didn't know that! :cheesy: All I know is that I have a really cute cousin named Todaro... (I know, I know... Shame on me! lol)
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    No worries... I am on the first rewrite of my...

    No worries... I am on the first rewrite of my entry too. Comes with the territory.
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    Jason, Thanks! I will try to think of a way to...

    Jason, Thanks! I will try to think of a way to take your suggestion about the Dad. I also wanted to show he didn't have a British accent before but I never ended up working that in. The problem that...
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    ***SPOILERS*** Hi Anthony, here we go. Making...

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    Hi Anthony, here we go. Making notes as I read.
    "Him" = him... or himself would probably be better (pg1)
    I'm assuming WOMAN and WIFE are the same person? You should introduce her...
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    **SPOILERS** Hi Tim, Making notes as I read....

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    Hi Tim, Making notes as I read.
    Instead of off-camera, the convention would be to write: MRS. DRUMMOND (O.S.)... also think MRS needs a period.
    Before she speaks the second time, you...
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    ***SPOILERS*** Hi Simon, Here we go, making...

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    Hi Simon, Here we go, making notes as I read.
    see’s = sees.
    "Hey man. You better get going." = Maybe think of a better way to get him out of the scene. This makes it seem like his...
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    ***SPOILERS*** Hi Christopher, making notes as I...

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    Hi Christopher, making notes as I go.
    Woah, great opening and V.O. dialogue.
    NINE YEAR-OLD BRYAN = should probably be Bryan (9). Same with 14-year old and etc.
    GREY SEDAN - LATER...
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    Hi Sunk99, He doesn't want anything from the...

    Hi Sunk99,
    He doesn't want anything from the father who's abandoned them (and you find out later, abused his mother), including money.
    The visual link is the smoking and the "badass" face.
    Others...
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    ***SPOILERS*** OK, Richard, opening the file....

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    OK, Richard, opening the file.
    Maybe that first character "VOICE-OVER" could be called NARRATOR?
    Wow, great descriptive writing.
    Something looks wrong with the character name...
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    ***SPOILERS*** OK Jason, here we go. NICE...

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    OK Jason, here we go.
    NICE opening, that's a great visual. Maybe tighten up the description of what is happening with his eyelids just a little.
    I like how this is playing out with...
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    Richard, thanks so much!

    Richard, thanks so much!
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    ***SPOILERS*** OK, here we go, Chris. "dinning"...

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    OK, here we go, Chris.
    "dinning" = dining
    "followed by JACK (7) following" = Was Jack following? Just checking :cheesy: Heheh. I know that was a typo and you meant to delete one of...
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