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    That's awesome, man. I'm sure it was a great...

    That's awesome, man. I'm sure it was a great experience. Love the pics.
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    I thought the movie was a blast. There were some...

    I thought the movie was a blast. There were some logical plot holes, but it was so charming I didn't really care. I'm a huge Nicholas Hoult fan from his days on Skins. Where in the film does Berg...
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    Thanks for the detailed breakdown. Can you share...

    Thanks for the detailed breakdown. Can you share how long the process took (especially post-production)?
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    I appreciate your response to my comment, and I...

    I appreciate your response to my comment, and I offer this not really as a rebuttal, but just as further clarification of my point of view.

    I have several thoughts on this matter, and they combine...
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    Favorite Thing: "Any other good news?" along with...

    Favorite Thing: "Any other good news?" along with the snarky dialogue of the computer in regards to her name. I'm not won over by CG, but I appreciate some good dialogue.

    Least Favorite Thing: The...
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    First film to watch this fest. Favorite Thing:...

    First film to watch this fest.

    Favorite Thing: the whispered narration. That was a strong and unusual choice, especially since it was only used for a specific section of the film. It would have...
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    OTHER: I have to admit, I wasn't a huge fan of episodes...

    I have to admit, I wasn't a huge fan of episodes 1 & 2, but 3 & 4 have been much better. I'm genuinely involved now.
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    Hey guys! Great to hear from both of you. I'm...

    Hey guys! Great to hear from both of you. I'm about to fly to a wedding for the weekend, but I'll get back to both of you as soon as I get back. (Or maybe even while I'm there, if I have time).
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    Thanks Dustin. Now if there were only some other...

    Thanks Dustin. Now if there were only some other Dallas DVXusers who wanted to play, I could be back in the game.
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    Thanks mookid, that's a great compliment.

    Thanks mookid, that's a great compliment.
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    Thanks everyone who commented for all the...

    Thanks everyone who commented for all the comments and suggestions. I'll definitely take everyone's thoughts into account when revising.
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    I really liked the football scene. Very sweet and...

    I really liked the football scene. Very sweet and emotional. I got the twist very early. Probably doesn't help that this is the last script I read, and a similar twist appeared in at least two other...
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    Really compelling story. The writing, in the...

    Really compelling story. The writing, in the beginning especially, is a bit clumsy, and the formatting (names, flashbacks) needs some fixing. But there's a lot of interesting action and twists. I...
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    This was a really nice, personal feeling story....

    This was a really nice, personal feeling story. Whether or not it was drawn from real life, it feels that way, and that's always good. I wonder why you don't want the father's face seen? This made me...
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    I liked this a lot, but was a little thrown by...

    I liked this a lot, but was a little thrown by the very end. Because we don't see her sneaking the kite back in or anything, there's definitely the possibility that it's the ghost of the father or...
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    I was wondering if it was from something else. I...

    I was wondering if it was from something else. I assumed you wouldn't quote Green Day in a Depression piece. I searched Google to see if anything else came up, but after 3 pages of Green Day and...
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    White Snake has a similar lyric too: "An' here...

    White Snake has a similar lyric too:

    "An' here I go again on my own
    Goin' down the only road I've ever known,
    Like a drifter I was born to walk alone"

    But Green Day's is:

    "I walk a lonely...
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    I really liked this. Nice twist (and I don't like...

    I really liked this. Nice twist (and I don't like twists generally). I especially like the powerful punch the ending packs, with the father joining his family on their long walk.

    Besides the typos...
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    Wow, that was a really pleasant surprise. Very...

    Wow, that was a really pleasant surprise. Very rich and detailed. Everything was specific. So specific there was almost an arbitrariness to it. Like, why a sushi chef? But I think the arbitrariness...
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    Dallas Peeps

    Hey guys. I just moved to Dallas from NYC, and I'm still getting settled, but I'd love to enter ScareFest. If you don't know me, I've entered a number of these before, and had pretty good success...
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    I liked this a lot, Chris. I'm a sucker for this...

    I liked this a lot, Chris. I'm a sucker for this kind of sci-fi drama thing. It reminds me of Frequency.

    "Tears well in Phil’s eyes.

    PHIL
    This was my father’s last experiment.
    (beat)
    He...
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    Most of the formatting/grammar notes seem to have...

    Most of the formatting/grammar notes seem to have been given, but I was thrown by the wife seeming to be introduced three times, as WOMAN, WIFE, and SHEILA. I thought maybe they were different women,...
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    I really liked the opening imagery here with the...

    I really liked the opening imagery here with the fish tank. I wish there was some more of that visual imagery throughout the screenplay, as it gets pretty talky.

    I like how the confused looks of...
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    Thanks guys for the good technical feedback....

    Thanks guys for the good technical feedback. Always appreciated. And I'm glad you both enjoyed it. I just downloaded your scripts and will probably get to them and your feedback tomorrow.
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    Nevermind. Third time's the charm. There was a...

    Nevermind. Third time's the charm. There was a firewall preventing the upload, so when I fixed that it worked.
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