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    I absolutely and whole-heartedly agree with Alex!...

    I absolutely and whole-heartedly agree with Alex!

    Unfortunately, and I speak for myself here, I believe consistency is very much the key here and unless you get prolific with achieving that blend...
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    I think if I squint carefully and let my...

    I think if I squint carefully and let my imagination go "slightly" nuts, I see the shapeley leg lamp from "A Christmas Story" in the smoky beam from the fly saucer, of the second poster.
  3. Some great ones mentioned already. I'd add: ...

    Some great ones mentioned already.

    I'd add:

    Critters

    The Abyss

    and my absolute favorite, The Iron Giant.
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    Sticky: Only if your bar has drinks served in pineapples...

    Only if your bar has drinks served in pineapples topped with tiny umbrellas.

    And you're no newbie, not with those mad skills in dialog and drama.
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    Sticky: You'd probably have them chased through a forest...

    You'd probably have them chased through a forest by glowing red-eyed beasts too, I think! :P

    Thanks!
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    I'd love to do "WarFest" and have it picked up by...

    I'd love to do "WarFest" and have it picked up by the filmmakers looking for scripts. But am guessing most would like to start production by the time we'll finish the contest, won't they?
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    Sticky: The top two scripts are the best examples of a...

    The top two scripts are the best examples of a family film.

    Thanks for the votes and keeping me within the top three. I'll take it!

    More than the family idea I think the sub-genre (sci-fi,...
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    Kitchen Fest - Your entire short takes place...

    Kitchen Fest - Your entire short takes place inside a kitchen. Any kitchen, restaurant, home, farm, cafeteria kitchen, army mess tent...

    Soccer Fest - Your short takes place on a soccer field. Any...
  9. Thread: Sproink

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    Wall-E, Edward Scissorhands, the Tin...

    Wall-E, Edward Scissorhands, the Tin man...Sproink has some DNA from them all.

    Glad you loved it, Sarah!

    This was a challenge to curb most dark tendencies and retain the simplest theme of...
  10. Thread: Sproink

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    Oh, yes, definitely has a bit of Gosling's...

    Oh, yes, definitely has a bit of Gosling's personality from "Drive"!

    Thanks for the feedback.
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    Some great points Craig, thanks for the feedback....

    Some great points Craig, thanks for the feedback.

    No such thing as a reviewer who is too dense, it's the screen-writer's job to make sure the reader/audience feels smart.

    That's always been...
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    If I may? This could be worked in quite...

    If I may?

    This could be worked in quite easily and reinforce the immediacy of his current bullying situation while giving an affirmative conclusion.

    Have him flee unseen bullies or pursuers,...
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    Is that a typo or a really bad a Italian accent?...

    Is that a typo or a really bad a Italian accent? :P

    If that's a first draft mine's an idea on a paper napkin.
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    David,you've really been too kind to a script...

    David,you've really been too kind to a script that was scrambled together just hours before the deadline.

    I just look at it now and go "ugh!" :)

    Thanks for the feedback!
  15. Sticky: I'm done voting and reviewing 'em all! All I can...

    I'm done voting and reviewing 'em all! All I can say is quite a few freckled kids are gonna be happy to play characters in this scripts. Read quite a few of them including mine. :)
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    The people inside the bar are extras, but still...

    The people inside the bar are extras, but still characters and I don’t know if that’s okay as far as the contest rules are concerned, but I guess you were going for atmospherics than actual casting....
  17. Thread: Youth

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    Ah, I see what you mean by this not being family...

    Ah, I see what you mean by this not being family friendly. J Though in tone it comes close to a Brothers Grimm fairytale and those were literally quite dark but I can see how your visuals wouldn’t...
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    Aw man, this ends much, much before I want it to!...

    Aw man, this ends much, much before I want it to! I can actually read your struggle in deciding how much exposition and visuals were important to the plot and how much could you get away with whilst...
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    Your diehard passion for sailing is clearly...

    Your diehard passion for sailing is clearly evident in the detailed and specific descriptions, of the technical (Sailboat model, temperature, geography sailtype etc.) and plot action aspects.

    I...
  20. Thread: Zorgon

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    Sarah, you write dialogs that not only bring the...

    Sarah, you write dialogs that not only bring the characters out of my computer screen but also stick true to form and function as the scene demands.

    No digressive ponderings or introspective...
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    The opening scene is a bit fragmented and you...

    The opening scene is a bit fragmented and you could smooth out the descriptions to get to your punchline about them having turned into mannequins. By just saying “faces of the mannequin children...
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    Brilliant! But why follow it up with the bit...

    Brilliant!

    But why follow it up with the bit about his intent? And then explain the execution behind that intent with the line, “But in a fun way.”

    This short is all about performance and...
  23. Sticky: I'm in! With forty minutes to go. I hope. :P

    I'm in! With forty minutes to go. I hope. :P
  24. Thread: Sproink

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    Now to catch some sleep and then hopefully wake...

    Now to catch some sleep and then hopefully wake up early to finish this sucker. Fingers crossed!
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    Sproink

    Logline: The last surviving clockwork bounty hunter has to bring back the most dangerous fugitive in the ole' West before his key winds down.

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