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  1. Thread: Homeroom

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    This was pretty cool. I pretty much knew that...

    This was pretty cool. I pretty much knew that Eric was gonna be the bad guy but it wtill worked. Especially when you add Jerome. Becky was a bitch but she was smart. I like that she was proactive...
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    Holy crap...now that is trapped!! Jesus. That...

    Holy crap...now that is trapped!! Jesus. That messed with my head. :Drogar-BlackEye(DBG Written very well and it became just horrifying when you realize she's never getting out of there. The...
  3. Thread: Animal control

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    Thanks for the reviews. I hate the title too. I...

    Thanks for the reviews. I hate the title too. I switched it from Defenseless to Animal Control....hating them both. I never have an issue with coming up with a good title, not sure why I did with...
  4. Thread: Ruby

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    Didn't think I came across as hostile. Sorry...

    Didn't think I came across as hostile. Sorry about that. I was just being straight forward which I thought was a safe way to be with Sunk since he is straight forward as well. I'm sure he didn't...
  5. Thread: Ruby

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    I feel like grading every aspect of your entry...

    I feel like grading every aspect of your entry but I'll hold back from that since I find that sort of, I don't know...rude. :Drogar-BigGrin(DBG)

    First impression is yikes...big chunks of...
  6. Thread: Truth or Dare

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    I like the idea here. I wrote something similar...

    I like the idea here. I wrote something similar a few years back where a girl was kidnapped and a bunch of little girls she was playing with ended up being other girls that were ghosts.

    I do...
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    Hey Marshall. First, thanks for the review on...

    Hey Marshall. First, thanks for the review on Animal Control. Now back at ya...

    I really liked the overall idea of this piece. At first the flashes between his family and the...
  8. Thread: Blessed

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    You are a ridiculously good writer Erich. This...

    You are a ridiculously good writer Erich. This was amazing. Full of everything. Visuals, emotion, beauty, depth. A different type of trapped and I really felt it too.

    So sad and...
  9. Thread: Glued

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    You are a sick and twisted man Rusti. LOL. That...

    You are a sick and twisted man Rusti. LOL. That was great. I do beieve you done spent some time in a trailer park to get that lingo down so darn perfect like. The dialog was the best part. Love...
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    Okay...two weird things. First, I live about 15...

    Okay...two weird things. First, I live about 15 minutes from Point Pleasant boardwalk and two, I had a cat in my story too....but I didn't kill mine. LOL.

    This had some really cool parts to it...
  11. Thread: Glued

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    Dawww...love the idea, very cool poster. Can't...

    Dawww...love the idea, very cool poster. Can't wait to read it!!! :laugh:
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    Sticky: It's true...third time's a charm. Uploaded with...

    It's true...third time's a charm. Uploaded with a new title. Had to start a new thread for it. Sorry to be a Pain in the Arse. :)
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    Sticky: Ugh...won't accept my upload. It's a PDF so I'm...

    Ugh...won't accept my upload. It's a PDF so I'm not sure why. Anyone else have a problem?
  14. Thread: Animal control

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    Animal control

    ANIMAL CONTROL - An independent young woman mistakenly puts herself in danger when she accepts help from her creepy apartment manager in an effort to trap a wounded cat.

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    Changed to animal control

    Changed to ANIMAL CONTROL....started a new thread under that title. :2vrolijk_08:
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    Damn you Keaton! Okay...still plenty of time...

    Damn you Keaton! Okay...still plenty of time...
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    Man...I seriously may have to bail. My story is...

    Man...I seriously may have to bail. My story is really coming out sucky. Unless maybe I come up with a new idea in the next few days.
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    I'm trying to get to 50%. I was eyeballing it by...

    I'm trying to get to 50%. I was eyeballing it by pages. Figured 6 pages I wanted at least 3 trapped the rest for set up. Trimming it back like crazy now hoping it doesn't leave holes. Been...
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    Ugh...I don't think I have enought 'trapped' time...

    Ugh...I don't think I have enought 'trapped' time to qualify. Dammit! :cry:
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    Just added the logline. Might have to make a new...

    Just added the logline. Might have to make a new poster...don't like this one. But I figured if I posted one and got the thread started I'd have to finish the screenplay! :)
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    A little "on the nose" Keaton. :happy:

    A little "on the nose" Keaton. :happy:
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    Defenseless by Marnie Mitchell-Lister

    CHANGED TO: "Animal Control" ---- STARTED A NEW THREAD - An independent young woman mistakenly puts herself in danger when she accepts help from her creepy apartment manager in an effort to trap a...
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    Sticky: Question....is there a preference for how long...

    Question....is there a preference for how long the person/people must be trapped? Or does the amount of time not matter? Like if someone is being hunted and then are trapped at the end, would that...
  24. Woot woot!!! Best of luck!!!

    Woot woot!!! Best of luck!!!
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    LOL...what's an "age innapropriate actor"? Do...

    LOL...what's an "age innapropriate actor"? Do you mean if the story calls for a 35 year old you don't want a student to play the part? They have to find a 35 year old actor? Don't mean to sound...
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