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  1. Thread: GPS

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    Hi KhamIsk, It's just duct tape on the...

    Hi KhamIsk,


    It's just duct tape on the shirt which has a number on it. Else, some teenaged boy, would just report killing everyone and ruin the game. So you must get their number.


    Her...
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    Guy-Gal - it really didn't matter to me, hence...

    Guy-Gal - it really didn't matter to me, hence human. I've changed it to a male.


    I've changed the ending to clear up the issue with the final text and added a one-liner at the start on...
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    Egg, I wish more people had your attitude. My...

    Egg, I wish more people had your attitude. My regular editor recently had a baby and no longer has the time. I'm dying for people to rip my stories up. Agree - I liked it means nothing to me...
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    Chris, Yep, yep. I agree - it will be fixed....

    Chris,
    Yep, yep. I agree - it will be fixed. Your picture - you are a dead ringer for my son-in-law. Look forward to reading your story. You guys are all fast readers.
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    Bill, Thanks for the input. Can you tell...

    Bill,

    Thanks for the input.
    Can you tell us anything about Billy and Tina? ***Not really - young couple. The director can decide the rest.
    I like the idea of kids with guns. They're in over...
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    Reef, Thanks for the critique. Re Greg...

    Reef,
    Thanks for the critique. Re Greg reading text. Yes, the text on the cell would be shown on screen. I don't like making the audience rely only on reading so I have him read it for them....
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    Egg, Thanks so much for the review. I see...

    Egg,
    Thanks so much for the review. I see what you mean about the scene change and names. On screen of course this would be evident, but not in the script as you point out. I'll adopt this...
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    Yes, a form of geo caching - geo war. You track...

    Yes, a form of geo caching - geo war. You track people rather than hidden items. We were going to do a geo caching short for the 48 Hour Film Festival and had a dozen genre senarios. Wound up...
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