Search:

Type: Posts; User: Craighoit

Search: Search took 0.00 seconds.
  1. Replies
    16
    Views
    8,449

    Chris and Darren, thanks for the feedback. My...

    Chris and Darren, thanks for the feedback. My next script will be better for it.

    One of the choices I made, and stand by, is that of Hawks being so self-aware. This is one of my favorite bits in...
  2. Replies
    16
    Views
    8,449

    "Billy Crystal does it every time he hosts the...

    "Billy Crystal does it every time he hosts the oscars." Laughing. Yes, you're right. I was mainly thinking of Purple Rose of Cairo as the basis of this, having forgotten about Last Action Hero and...
  3. Replies
    16
    Views
    8,449

    Ruston, thank you for your astute comments. They...

    Ruston, thank you for your astute comments. They are really very well thought-out and insightful. I realized the extras in the bar after I sent it in. Ooops. They are there really more for the...
  4. Replies
    16
    Views
    8,449

    Thank you! I really appreciate the feedback and...

    Thank you! I really appreciate the feedback and thoughts. You're right about the drop vs lets go of the soda. And with "entranced" - at the time I wondered if it wasn't literal enough:

    David...
  5. Replies
    16
    Views
    8,449

    Hey, if anyone has any comments - good, bad or...

    Hey, if anyone has any comments - good, bad or even indifferent - I'd love to hear them. Would like to get better at this and feedback is an important part of that. What you liked, what you didn't...
  6. Replies
    16
    Views
    8,449

    Thanks Anthony. The title was a good starting...

    Thanks Anthony. The title was a good starting point. For awhile it was all I had...
  7. Replies
    16
    Views
    8,449

    The Ruby of Rangoon

    OK, here goes. I suppose if I do this, I have to write it, yes?

    The title is...

    The Ruby of Rangoon.

    And here's a log line...

    A bullied boy joins his celluloid hero to unearth the...
Results 1 to 7 of 7