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    Sticky: I have a great idea for this one. It's called...

    I have a great idea for this one. It's called 'Korgon'

    :)
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    Sticky: dtroop506 hehe I'll have to find an excuse to end...

    dtroop506 hehe I'll have to find an excuse to end up there - thanks :)
    And Rustom yeah I don't see why not. The premise of a silent but lovable misfit is a common one in good kids stories and films....
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    Sticky: Oh WOW!! Thanks everyone!! This made my day. :)...

    Oh WOW!! Thanks everyone!! This made my day. :) Congrats to all - especially stoked to have won in such great company x
  4. Thread: Next Fest!

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    FutureFest - set in the future MuteFest - no...

    FutureFest - set in the future
    MuteFest - no dialogue
    FairytaleFest- scripts have to de adaptations of fairytales
    Petfest - scripts have to be about animals & starring animals :P
  5. Thread: Youth

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    Ok cool yeah I really like that premise - just...

    Ok cool yeah I really like that premise - just maybe there are some leftover remnants from your original idea still in there that could be cleared out. Or just make it a teeny bit more obvious. It's...
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    Hehe Helen Keller in a library - it could be very...

    Hehe Helen Keller in a library - it could be very touching :P And you're very welcome! I really enjoyed your script and hey - writing descriptions is easy - writing dialogue is tough so you've got...
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    There's a lot I like about this. The set-up is...

    There's a lot I like about this. The set-up is good. The tension between the two characters is great. We really feel for Amber and we're sucked into (pardon the pun) the mystery which is foreshadowed...
  8. Thread: Sproink

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    Ooh I love this, unsurprisingly. I'm such a fan...

    Ooh I love this, unsurprisingly. I'm such a fan of your writing Rustom. You are reliably excellent - such a light touch. I think the highest compliment anyone can give a script is that they haven't...
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    I'm sure you made mistakes and broke rules...

    I'm sure you made mistakes and broke rules somewhere in this but I didn't notice any of it because I was busy enjoying the story :) So, that has to be a good sign! I'm a sucker for these types of...
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    Smart making all the other kids mannequins so...

    Smart making all the other kids mannequins so that you're left with just the two characters! I like how surreal this is - reminds me of kids TV shows in the 90s when they were a lot odder. BUT it...
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    Nice story - I always love the dynamics between...

    Nice story - I always love the dynamics between grandparents and grandkids. You set the mood very well and it's very clear that you're 'writing what you know'.

    As others have said, there are a few...
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    I really enjoyed this one a lot! Great dialogue -...

    I really enjoyed this one a lot! Great dialogue - lots of personality and humour - and although it's not entirely naturalistic I think that suits the mood. The style is consistent and that's what...
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    Well! Chris I do believe you've made me think :)...

    Well! Chris I do believe you've made me think :) I like this a lot - the metaphorical sci-fi stuff is right up my alley. You established your conflict right bam at the beginning and carried it...
  14. Thread: Zorgon

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    Oh and thanks re: the numbers - didn't know that.

    Oh and thanks re: the numbers - didn't know that.
  15. Thread: Zorgon

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    Thanks all for reading and commenting! Ha!...

    Thanks all for reading and commenting!



    Ha! Oops - I would never have even thought of that. Man, I forget how different our lingo is! Maybe now Sherlock and Doctor Who are so big over there our...
  16. Thread: Zorgon

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    Thanks Darren. Mom and Mum aren't different...

    Thanks Darren. Mom and Mum aren't different spellings - they are different words. And lots of Irish kids call their folks Mom now thanks to the pervasive American influence. And doh - was it supposed...
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    Sticky: It's a lot harder to sustain two characters in...

    It's a lot harder to sustain two characters in one room for 100 pages than for 6, dude :P

    But, I hear ya on one level. If less restrictions attract more entries then that's a good thing, and I...
  18. Thread: Zorgon

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    Yeah I've seen The Road :P How about...

    Yeah I've seen The Road :P

    How about Xylophone? It sounds like a Z...but it isn't a Z...
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    Sticky: Teehee Anthony you're right. I'm the Bellatrix...

    Teehee Anthony you're right. I'm the Bellatrix Lestrange to his Voldemort :P

    Less characters! More rules!!

    :)
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    Sticky: Believe me if you're ever tasked to write a...

    Believe me if you're ever tasked to write a script for a producer they'll have approximately one million percent more restrictions on ya. Restrictions force you to be creative - I think it's good to...
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    Sticky: Aww well I enjoyed it. Free reign is for the...

    Aww well I enjoyed it. Free reign is for the weak! I love me some parameters.
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    Sticky: You brought this on yourself, Keaton ;)

    You brought this on yourself, Keaton ;)
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    Sticky: Done! Good luck all!

    Done! Good luck all!
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    Nice poster!

    Nice poster!
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    I'm suitably intrigued!

    I'm suitably intrigued!
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