Search:

Type: Posts; User: Chris_Keaton

Page 1 of 8 1 2 3 4
Search: Search took 0.02 seconds.
  1. I keep getting the, 'if you lived in LA I could...

    I keep getting the, 'if you lived in LA I could work with you' answer. Is that complete BS. I mean it's a screenplay, I type it on a computer, it's bits of data that can be transmitted across the...
  2. Replies
    28
    Views
    9,358

    Let's face it, to be a 'jobbing writer' you need...

    Let's face it, to be a 'jobbing writer' you need to live where your boss lives. I've lost many a job because I don't live in LA (or there abouts). For those of us who don't live in LA the spec script...
  3. You can call and pitch your screenplay, but what...

    You can call and pitch your screenplay, but what may work better is if you do an email query. Send your title and logline to agents/managers/producers. If your title and logline peek their interest...
  4. Replies
    10
    Views
    3,531

    I think you may be channeling an early childhood...

    I think you may be channeling an early childhood memory of a short that is pretty much the exactly as you describe and titled, 'The Red Balloon'. It won an oscar.
    ...
  5. lol Yes! I've spread the word.

    lol Yes! I've spread the word.
  6. Replies
    74
    Views
    15,660

    He bit his fingerprints off, was my guess, but I...

    He bit his fingerprints off, was my guess, but I couldn't see either. But I'm good at guessing.
  7. Sticky: Hah, next time I'll give you a family friendly...

    Hah, next time I'll give you a family friendly horror.
  8. Replies
    20
    Views
    9,024

    Man, that is f'd up! I felt the tension, my chest...

    Man, that is f'd up! I felt the tension, my chest got tight, but then it ended. You got the start to something special here.
  9. Replies
    22
    Views
    8,866

    And the best liberal use of a smoke machine goes...

    And the best liberal use of a smoke machine goes to..... Okay, not sure I got this and it was the ending up until the zombie attack I thought the guy was just tripping balls because of the smoke. If...
  10. Thread: Arabella

    by Chris_Keaton
    Replies
    93
    Views
    16,394

    Yeah, I tried that in a short before and its hard...

    Yeah, I tried that in a short before and its hard to pull off under 10 minutes.
  11. Thread: The Well

    by Chris_Keaton
    Replies
    75
    Views
    13,351

    You succeeded in getting a film in and I assume...

    You succeeded in getting a film in and I assume you had a good time doing it. That's more than most. :thumbsup:
  12. Thread: Wolf Tree

    by Chris_Keaton
    Replies
    174
    Views
    26,610

    The opening dialog turned me off, because why...

    The opening dialog turned me off, because why would there be kids there? And the one excuse made me groan. I don't think it would've if we would've seen the mother and the family dynamic before this...
  13. Thread: The Well

    by Chris_Keaton
    Replies
    75
    Views
    13,351

    Congrats on finishing a film. The location was...

    Congrats on finishing a film. The location was cool, but didn't seem like a well, especially when well's have to go underground, so you don't drill them into hills. It had a home camera kinda vibe...
  14. Replies
    20
    Views
    8,783

    I like her car, lol. Okay this is a tried but...

    I like her car, lol. Okay this is a tried but true story, unfortunately we figure it out way to soon. If you have a twist it needs to be ultimately revealed soon after the audience figures it out....
  15. Thread: Last Day

    by Chris_Keaton
    Replies
    51
    Views
    13,127

    I started with possibly having 3 entries in this...

    I started with possibly having 3 entries in this fest to having none. 2 of the guys just disappeared. I know s*%t happens and stuff can't get done, but don't just disappear. Just tell me, I've done...
  16. Replies
    174
    Views
    21,626

    So was this a set up or did he just happen to...

    So was this a set up or did he just happen to capture a monster that enjoys being tortured and raped before she eats? You certainly got that grungy vibe all sticky over this. Story was a little slap...
  17. Thread: Arabella

    by Chris_Keaton
    Replies
    93
    Views
    16,394

    That is one damn creepy doll. Didn't she figure...

    That is one damn creepy doll. Didn't she figure out that locking her in a room doesn't work. Maybe this was time for her to play with fire. And when that damned thing is singing was she the only one...
  18. Oh and for some reason I had to crank my sound...

    Oh and for some reason I had to crank my sound all the way up to hear it.
  19. Replies
    74
    Views
    15,660

    The acting was good and that is what kept this...

    The acting was good and that is what kept this from being a bore. Even in one room pieces something needs to happen visually, but we got talking and some talking in a different place. And through all...
  20. Not sure why you went with the funny DVX opener....

    Not sure why you went with the funny DVX opener. Nice location. The start felt a little slow for me. I think that may be because the threat wasn't made clear initially, so what should've been tension...
  21. Replies
    194
    Views
    22,430

    Imagine if you died on plane. Stuck with all...

    Imagine if you died on plane. Stuck with all those annoying passengers. Ugh.
  22. Thread: Bear

    by Chris_Keaton
    Replies
    20
    Views
    8,839

    This looked good and with the bear thing I...

    This looked good and with the bear thing I thought we were going to get another demonic toy. But in the end I really didn't get what was going on with the Bear. So basically all I got was a kid who...
  23. Thread: Blackout

    by Chris_Keaton
    Replies
    25
    Views
    10,160

    I like this one. Not really any complaints. The...

    I like this one. Not really any complaints. The VO may have been wordy, but that's a nit. It really looked like you gave it your all and gave a s*%t. These stories always bug me though. Why haven't...
  24. Replies
    11
    Views
    6,560

    Damn, I think I fell a sleep during the opening...

    Damn, I think I fell a sleep during the opening credits. As a short you generally have 1-2 minutes to grab your audience, don't spend that time on credits. To be completely honest, I kinda just...
  25. Replies
    19
    Views
    7,863

    Loved the opening and heck the ending was great....

    Loved the opening and heck the ending was great. The acting wasn't so great. The human buildings kinda killed the feel it was on an alien planet. But damn I like me some sci-fi! Good Job!
Results 1 to 25 of 200
Page 1 of 8 1 2 3 4