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    Great job, Chris! Always amazing to see what you...

    Great job, Chris! Always amazing to see what you coax out of your students. You should be very proud.
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    I really like your writing style. Your dialogue...

    I really like your writing style. Your dialogue is great. I absolutely love the visual of them all coming to and realizing they're upside down.
    Problem is, you ratchet up a fair amount of tension...
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    Here's my thoughts on this: * First and...

    Here's my thoughts on this:
    * First and foremost: beautifully written action. Great flow. Flies by. Great description.
    * The Zombie/Vamp "love" story is fantastic. I'm really cheering for these...
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    I really enjoyed this. I'm kind of a newcomer...

    I really enjoyed this. I'm kind of a newcomer around here, so you'll have to forgive me for repeating a bunch of stuff that everyone else is, apparently, well aware of:
    You have an easy style,...
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    Nice work Derek. Some very creepy imagery. A...

    Nice work Derek. Some very creepy imagery.

    A few things:

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    There is a LOT of ink on these pages. I understand that this is a very visual short script, and that you can get away with some...
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    I dig this a lot, Chris. Very cool. The “he...

    I dig this a lot, Chris. Very cool.

    The “he thinks he’s alive but he’s dead” twist at the end got me good. Didn’t see it coming, and I really loved how that moment is what FREED HIM.
    In fact,...
  7. Thread: Animal control

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    Fantastic work Marnie! Serious. This was a...

    Fantastic work Marnie! Serious.

    This was a standard (though very well written) “creepy guy abducts innocent girl” scenario, but the cat imagery you played with throughout the entire script...
  8. Thread: Glued

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    What the hell!? We got us a real live Rustus...

    What the hell!? We got us a real live Rustus Trailaparkus on our hands! Where did you learn how poor white people talk??? Because I hate to feed your bloated ego but…boy you nailed it. I was...
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    Quick disclosure: ever since Iíve become a father, I don't really have the stomach for pedophile characters. The use of pedophilia as a source of tension...I just have to say... turns me off like a...
  10. Thread: Blessed

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    Blessed

    A dying man receives the gift of omniscience.

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    Really stunning, Chris. Here's what I love: ...

    Really stunning, Chris.

    Here's what I love: You came to a contest begging for treasonous plot twists and turncoat antagonists, and waded in with an absolutely heartbreaking statement on the...
  12. Thread: "The Patch-up Kid"

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    Say my name. Loud and proud, beyotches. So...

    Say my name.
    Loud and proud, beyotches.

    So I heard someone here was recognized for a "Patchwork" something or a "West-up Kid." Something something?

    I hope it was like Slumdog Millionaire....
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    Great job, Chris. To echo the thoughts I...

    Great job, Chris.

    To echo the thoughts I left at MP:

    It didn't bother me AT ALL that there wasn't some sort of critical mass moment when she decided to move on.

    It was the void of...
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