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11-01-2010, 03:51 PM
Sticky: Congratulations! :beer:
This piece needs time to breathe it all happens so quick. Some good shots and the short looks good and is edited quite well. I'm sure you've heard about your actors so I won't really go into it. That...
So after discovering how I could finally watch it (the patient 10-15min wait) I totally forgot to comment!
I've got to say their dinner looked very light and not at all appetizing. Was human on...
10-29-2010, 01:35 PM
Amy great work up until she gets to that house. I kind of lost touch with what was going on and the special effects / all-of-a-sudden supernatural element really pushed it too far for me. Your...
Nice Twin Peaks reference, although the news report is a bit much haha.
I liked it and HOORAY for Tom!
It's cool and I liked the lack of dialogue, great use of eyes.
Refreshingly simple and a little uncomfortable, very creepy.
A tad too shaky, you need to balance it, especially with DSLRs. A steadicam or a shoulder mount would help with that and you don't...
Everythings really been said about the bit of overexposure, audio, strange but cool dog walking man who shows up at the end.
Still it's a strong piece and I liked it, well done.
I like how accident to accident to murder develops naturally and that reaction of the kid at the end is an excellent way to end it. Nice entry, had me laughing in a good way.
Great cinematography and you've crafted a psuedo-hitchcockian thriller.
You have a beautiful lead actress and she does a wonderful job with the material.
Love the silhouette of the knife in the...
10-29-2010, 01:04 PM
Great little genre flick Matt!
The acting was a little stale but the make-up was good and that last shot where he's listing to the radio is excellently paced. I was terrified for the guy as he...
Last time I checked that is one of the many interpretations of what creates a thriller :grin:
Hey Mike, I liked the short. It begins quietly paced and well planned out to create this sense of...
10-29-2010, 12:52 PM
Creative and relies heavily on vocal work of your actors. I'm on the fence though. It left me wanting something more visually. Kudos, can't fault you for trying something new.
10-29-2010, 12:49 PM
Good work, after the climax it goes on a little too much with backstory that you'd benefit from naturally weaving throughout the narrative instead of adding an epilogue. I liked the girl though, the...
10-29-2010, 12:34 PM
ha... no.... :huh: what would give you that idea... YOU KNOW TOO MUCH!
Feel free to rant away. I appreciate all the input I can get and I really like the idea of showing these random acts and...
10-29-2010, 12:26 PM
You walk a very morally gray area in this film and I like the ambiguity of who is right/who is wrong. It's crafted quite well and even though he could very well be an evil nazi bastard I felt bad for...
10-29-2010, 12:19 PM
I liked it a lot, I think all your close-ups really confine us but that benefits the story I think, since it traps the audience in this space. Putting the gun together for a dual, that was intense,...
10-29-2010, 12:12 PM
I liked a lot of your close-ups/angles on the main character, it really pushed his emotions to the forefront. The story was good but as others have said I would have liked to see a little more...
Nice job. A little too much exposition in the beginning and the ADR threw me but otherwise it turned out nicely. It's creepy, kind of like staring into a terrible but almost too real future.
That opening is so tense. Actually everytime you cut back to the tracks, damn, it's quiet and just beat after beat works so well. The story is really tight, it's well shot, acted. At first it's a...
10-29-2010, 11:54 AM
Excellent all around. Bravo sir, bravo :beer:
It's not bad, like everyone else said just polish up your technique. Keep up the good work :thumbsup:
10-28-2010, 12:15 PM
Judging by the last few fests in the spring it seems it'll have something to do with Drama or Love, maybe...
Desirefest - Where a character longs for someone...
It's some strong work but It had me confused at times, not sure on the motivation of the main woman.
The laundry room scene, I get you were going for something different but it's a jarring and...
The bad news is I'm merely repeating from others of course: Audio, acting, sfx show potential but need improvement and for being "drugged" the girl had an awful lot of stamina.
The good is that...
A good story marred by some below-average acting. Outside of the little girl, she was exceptional but everyone older just felt rigid, like they were reading from a script. Good green screen and I did...
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