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    Sticky: ONP thread...

    ONP
    thread
    http://www.dvxuser.com/V6/showthread.php?298540-ScriptFest-XIV-HolidayFest-O-N-P
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    http://darrenjameseeley.files.wordpress.com/2012/12/onp2.pdf

    Note: it was also recently...
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    ScriptFest XIV: HolidayFest: O.N.P.

    After Santa leaves, the understaffed elves take over . They aren't going to take it anymore.

    ONP (Occupy North Pole) is a tentative title. I was also considering the Pole Party Action...and I'm...
  3. I wonder if Chis will really go by the mantra of...

    I wonder if Chis will really go by the mantra of When In Rome. I can kind of imagine a Roman orgy...I was thinking about it too, but I drew blanks on what/how to write it so I brainstormed and...
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    Sticky: Wonderful. Extended date. With all the crazy...

    Wonderful. Extended date. With all the crazy hubbub this time, I might be able to crank it out.
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    Sticky: Has some minor spark of a fancy idea, but I'm not...

    Has some minor spark of a fancy idea, but I'm not sure if I can do it by deadline. I'm even skeptical that it would work.
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    Not much to add here, I think it is the best as...

    Not much to add here, I think it is the best as far as the horror element goes. That said, I am not a huge fan of dialog that is intentionally mispelled for character punctuation sake. It's always...
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    While I liked the alley description, I think i...

    While I liked the alley description, I think i would have liked the lights coming first. Why are they last to be mentioned? Did they need to be mentioned at all? I ask that because Joe is thrown out...
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    Chopping off dead men's fingers don't count?...

    Chopping off dead men's fingers don't count? :beer:
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    While that title page gave me pause - I'm a 12 pt...

    While that title page gave me pause - I'm a 12 pt courier traditionalist, what can I say ? - overall I liked the read. But I didn't love it. "The Doctor" is sometimes substituted for 'Doctor Reeves'...
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    Oh, let me see... Night Of The Living Dead...

    Oh, let me see...

    Night Of The Living Dead
    Halloween
    Evil Dead I and II
    Phantasm

    Sorry. Just had to remind you...you probably meant it in jest anyway.
    At first when I started to read this,...
  11. Thread: I...Win

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    As far as technical levels go, The space margins...

    As far as technical levels go, The space margins on top of the pages are off, so the entire script reads crammed. A little white space never hurt anyone. The next thing I noticed about the piece is...
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    I really liked this one, nicely written. I would...

    I really liked this one, nicely written. I would have liked a little more at the Crossroads, I suppose, just shy of Aiden asking a question. The Faustian- like pact here is hard to really see as...
  13. Thread: 99%

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    Not too bad. While not exactly horror themed, it...

    Not too bad. While not exactly horror themed, it did have a bit of suspense regading mind games. I agree that Carl didn't play by his own game rules. I also felt the ending with the security guards...
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    Part classic horror, part dark comedy to be more...

    Part classic horror, part dark comedy to be more precise.
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    This Ain't Vegas

    :zombie_smiley:




    In a mausoleum, five ghouls take the new caretaker hostage during a game of poker. A whole new meaning to a Dead Man's hand.

    13 pgs
  16. Thread: The Find

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    Okay. Some folks wanted to know. So here's what's...

    Okay. Some folks wanted to know. So here's what's different.
    There are no bold headers. Some four line paragraphs are broken up into three or two. Some even one. As stated before, the 12 page...
  17. Thread: The Find

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    I generally hate bold headers. I only used them...

    I generally hate bold headers. I only used them here because I had to kill white space but I also wanted to be sure scenes-locations didn't get too lost.

    Laura said 'we are The Find' not as...
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    Nailed the sci-fi B exploitation gag with one big...

    Nailed the sci-fi B exploitation gag with one big bulls-eye. If there was T & A it could pass for one of those types of films. Good or bad thing? It's subjective, I 'spose...but the only main...
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    I also was going to mention the blocks of text,...

    I also was going to mention the blocks of text, (4 lines +) but it seems that's all been covered. Everything said echoes what I will say...but I found some areas that folks didn't mention so I'll get...
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    Sticky: I have decided to upload the required 8 page...

    I have decided to upload the required 8 page version, even though I felt that my 11 page version was far better in spades. In short, I had to play censor. I cut out F bombs, two gore extended scenes,...
  21. Thread: The Find

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    After giving it some thought, I might have to put...

    After giving it some thought, I might have to put Find "out" of the comp. Although I did manage to make some drastic cuts and sacrifice white space, I also felt that the 11 page draft was far...
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    I put the word out at Simply Scripts, I don't...

    I put the word out at Simply Scripts, I don't know if anyone's paying attention.
  23. Thread: The Find

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    The Find

    53404

    THE FIND

    On an uncharted planet, a communication breakdown between an alien civilization and a team of astronauts goes horribly wrong.

    Will contain R type material.
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    Sticky: I got a funky idea. It's been floating in my...

    I got a funky idea. It's been floating in my brain for a few years but I never knew exactly what to do with it. It'll be a little on the Heavy Metal side of things. And when I say Heavy Metal I...
  25. Brother From Another Planet The Thing '82 They...

    Brother From Another Planet
    The Thing '82
    They Live
    Invasion of the Body Snatchers (all of them!)
    Predator
    Aliens
    The Arrival
    Night Of The Creeps
    Dark City
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