New production logo AE

[stillvague]

made this production logo in AE a couple days ago. opinions on it?

http://media.putfile.com/production-logo

its short btw

[Steve_Arm]

Great. Suggestion:
Maybe 2 frames before the white flash / cut / burn / end the logo came out bigger filling the frame?

[Chris Stearns]

Very cool. I like your style.

[stillvague]

thanks! i might have to see how that turns out

[Schmovies production]

i like it. bravo

[AndrewKramer]

Very nice,
I would like to see the logo just flicker or shutter to the center at the end. Not necessarily larger but centered with some jitter like you have it.

It's cool to be differn't but sometimes simplicity works best when it comes to balance.

[bpotter]

Nice work. I like the skewed perspective. The "Still Vauge" animation at the bottom looks a little rough to me. Just a personal taste observation. If it were to jitter or something as it changed locations it would look better to me, but the sharp direction change looks a little rough.

[SomewhereinLA]

Don't like it, feels like a bunch of film style plugins put together. I don't see any kind of emotion. I am not saying don't use the plugins, just don't make it so obvious. I do like what you did with the birds. I think you have all the elements to make something very nice, but as it is presented now, I don't dig it. It needs to be refine and finessed.

[casey warren]

how did you make it?

[stillvague]

thanks everyone for opinions. i appreciate the input. ill try to check out a way to get it to the center.

somewhereinLA
none of that was plugins. the super 8 was real super 8 and matte out with luminance. every single thing that moves is a jpeg image on a 3D layer and keyframed for the animation. no plugins or presets. just thought i should clear that up

[Steve_Arm]

Yeah... I wondered, it was too good to be plugins. :)

[-zach-]

I love everything about it, but I would make Still Vague larger and closer to the center of the frame. It can be off center, but it confused me a little. I like it alot.