Pier Surf 1 + 3, local surfing shorts

[Crimson]

Here's 2 surfing pieces I did just for fun, filmed at Oceanside Pier, CA with Broken Social Scene used in both.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c9AR1K_qu5A
Pier Surf III is in my opinion is a better "surf" video with better performances by my friends instead of random people, tighter edits and a few other things I was experimenting with. I've learned a lot from the first video to this one and it shows.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0Af10BX9csg&search=beach%20surf%20surfing%20surfer%20surfers%2 0wave%20waves%20bss%20broken%20social%20scene
Pier Surf 1 is a bit more entertaining to a non surfer maybe, the water looks nicer because its a sunny day as opposed to 3's haziness, but it's not edited to the music as precise as the stuff later. I realize the beginning is a bit slow, I did it to pace with the music but I guess it was a bit too much.

for the time being im filming these to practice and to entertain my friends, but as soon as I get a camera with a longer zoom and a light housing I'm going to get a bit more serious with it. so, any comments or criticisms?

[Crimson]

bump?

[Matt Sconce]

I liked the videos. The second one was my favorite because it had variations and different scenes.

[Kdawg]

Yeah the second one was more interesting.... but the cuts of the kid on the street getting ready were a bit drawn out. Same with the scene of the white safety fence on the pier. But like I said more enjoyable than the first one.