Short Film - Edit This

[jasper]

Shot this a few weeks ago. Any feedback, positive or negative, would be appreciated. Thanks.

Here's an HD Version
http://vimeo.com/1422675

http://www.lulu.tv/?p=4129

[abalex]

that's was really cool bro! Nice little short. What was the resolution on this 720?

[jasper]

thanks man. yeah we shot 720/24pn.

[Justin Marx]

Nice job.. funny.. sound was great, what did you use?

- - Justin

[albo]

Good stuff!

[4mat]

loved it :O)
Didn't like the lighting on the guy who passed the film.
Looked a little red and flat.
Were you using a getto steadicam/dolly ?
-matt

[digitalnirvana9]

That was laugh-out-loud funny...thanks for sharing this, I needed a good laugh today...Peace, Norm

[DavidBeier]

entertaining

[J.R. Hudson]

I found this very well done. About 5% from being completely polished.

Nice!

[jasper]

thanks to everyone for the feedback, I really appreciate it!

Justin- believe it or not, with the exception of the door hit and a quick little "whoosh" on the snap zoom, all of the sound is production captured audio.

We used a doorway dolly-- no track was laid, it was all freewheeled.

[jcapurro]

LOL!! That was great! And looks real nice. I'm a pro photographer just getting into video, and it looks well lit to me, but what do I know right?

Keep up the good work!

Cheers,
Jeremy

[Chris Messineo]

Wow, great stuff!

A really well told short story. Very nice. Great music.

Congratulations,

Chris

[nedelman]

Good stuff. I liked it a lot.

[bluetuned]

I laughed.

[Seamus McFlannel]

I thought it was great short film. Thanks for posting it.
I laughed out loud.

Seamus+

[PappasArts]

That takes me back to the Sony/Ampex type c 1 inch days. Most of the kids here were just born or swinging in dads pants when that was the top of the line. I really enjoyed that short. Thanks!

--Imagine if he brought in a 2 inch quad tape reel.....

Pappas


Shot this a few weeks ago. Any feedback, positive or negative, would be appreciated. Thanks.

http://televersemedia.com/editthis.html

[Tunnell Mill]

Hilarious! Loved it! Funny as hell! Great job all around!

[ZanucK]

I liked it a lot, positive feedback

[Justyn]

Nice short all around. Good match cuts and composition. Great compression too. What did you use and your settings for compression?


Also a sweet facility. Where is it?


Thanks and keep showing... all positive.

[jasper]

Thank you all for the positive feedback-- you guys are too kind.

Justyn, we used Digital Rapids to encode it, and we compressed at 700kbps to mpeg 4.

Oh and the facility is in Stamford, CT.

[sonic freak]

Great job.

I loved the music. Great edit/camera work for dialouge and during the 1" machine. Made me want to go out and do a short about an old job I had at a pizza place!

I have a hunch- you must of worked that kind of job before, right?

What is a doorway dolly? (cheap &/or homemade?)

[danny d]

nice, using 1" can kill a man

[jasper]

A doorway dolly is not homemade. You can mount a jib arm or a tripod on it, but it doesn't have the hydraulic boom of a chapman or a fisher (brand names of other dollies). You can swap out the wheels and use track with it also. I'm not sure how much they cost, they're not exactly cheap.

[jasper]

I posted an HD version of this short on Vimeo, which is a great site...if you haven't already discovered it.

http://vimeo.com/1422675

[Ksun83]

was he flicking off the producer at the end of the skit?

[jasper]

not intentionally