Trailer for short: "Monsters in the Closet"

[Existentialist]

Hey guys
let me know what you think of this trailer. Made this short with my kids.
Critiques greatly welcomed.
Thanks.

http://http://www.stickypod.com/stickypod_upload/uploads/Trailer.mpg

[STYLZ]

broken link homie.

[Existentialist]

Oops!

Here's the good linK:

http://www.stickypod.com/stickypod_upload/uploads/Trailer.mpg

[Bsaint]

what was that shot with... looks really over exposed in some of the shots, and I the font was a bit childish, but i guess thats what ur going for so cool, I bet your kids loved it.

[Existentialist]

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah, it's a goofy, cheesy and kiddy movie, but you're right, the kids really got a kick out of it, and it was their first flick.
But I"m more interested in feedback such as yours, what do you mean by "overexposed"? And what can I do to avoid this?
BTW, shot with a Panasonic PV-GS65, edited on Sony Vegas.
Thanks man

[Bsaint]

some of the shots were too bright.. over exposed meaning exposure should have been turned down or brightness turned down in editing and contrast

[Existentialist]

Thanks a lot for the insight. I have been studying a lot on this, and how to control white balance and so forth. Apperently I was just shooting everything on auto, and I'm learning that a good shot is one where you're able to control the environment and take control of your camera. It's a challenge, but that's the way to learn I guess.

[d4v1dz33]

please dont finish that "movie"

[Existentialist]

LOL Ok. Thanks for the comment.

[myfriendimage]

And never go handheld unless your going for a jittery effect.