View Full Version : First time

11-25-2005, 08:47 PM
Here some grabs of a short im working on any advice. this is my first time ever doing anything remotely cinematic

J.R. Hudson
11-25-2005, 08:54 PM
Honestly these look like random grabs from anything and not at all cinematic; especailly in viewing them out of context. Advice? Show us some actual footage?

11-25-2005, 09:13 PM
Have to agree with John on this one. I can't even tell what the first shot is. But, we don't know the story. Tell us the story. SHOW us the story. Post some footage.

11-26-2005, 09:55 AM
Keep workin' it, Calavera... You'll get there.

11-26-2005, 08:17 PM
try this


11-26-2005, 08:18 PM
Tucson short

Zac Henke
11-26-2005, 08:51 PM
Use modify instead of making other posts.

John's right; they don't give any clue as to what this short is about.

Watched the video:

Uh... interesting looking... but what is it about? Why is he banging the camera? WHAT IS GOING ON?!

Jeremy Ordan
11-26-2005, 09:46 PM
I have to agree with LSG... It made no sense to me, don't know what sort of look you were going for, or what the deal was... I'm confused and don't get it.

Ed Kishel
11-27-2005, 02:04 AM
an abstract experiment?