ONPOINT PICTURES Proudly presents........

[ONPOINT PICTURES]

I am new to DVX as far as posting things on here for criticism and opinions.

So Please be easy with my work but at the same time tell me what you think ?

Here is the link to my website
http://www.Onpointpictures.com It will give you a brief intro about me and my work and Passion in filmmaking.

Below are the Links to My DEMO's From a Wedding to a Sweet 16 to a Music Video. Please Give me your proffesional Opinion and advice on improvement and anything I missed.
Link # 1 A Wedding DEMO :
http://homepage.mac.com/rolando23/iMovieTheater5.html

Link # 2 A Sweet 16 DEMO:
http://homepage.mac.com/rolando23/iMovieTheater6.html

Link # 3 Another Sweet 16 DEMO:
http://homepage.mac.com/rolando23/iMovieTheater7.html

Link # 4 A Music Video DEMO of NYC NY "MY HOME TOWN"
http://homepage.mac.com/rolando23/iMovieTheater9.html

[Smithhouse]

On point for great filmmaking my friend... Good stuff. Very professional. Keep up the good work.

[Paul Coleman]

I like the music vid. Good feel to it.

[Zac Henke]

I love the song on the front page of your website. It's on an old chillout mix I have.

Cool site overall.

The wedding demo was nice! The compression was obvious, but I know that on a personal DVD it would be great.

[LuckyProducer]

I don't know man, I was watching the wedding video and the entire time, the video didn't seem settling. There was always too much effects. Seems like you didn't white balance at the reception or something. Also, your exposure seems off at some points. I saw behind the bride but not really her face. Really watch the white balance man. But good job though man. Peace!

[Adam Crabbe]

There was a Black Eyed Peas song that one of your videos was set to and, to me anyway, it didn't seem to match. The flow of the video seemed to slow for the music.
Also, I noticed that the black around the edges in one scene was very choppy. But then, I suppose, that all depends on what you have to work with.
:)

[Huiy Tang]

Dude-
You went overboard with the live type effects. Remember less is more. Lost some of the effects in your vids and simplify. Your on the brink of professional. But not quite yet.