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francheezie
11-07-2005, 02:17 PM
All the images on this poster were shot with the DVX. It's for a 18 min comedy/horror we shot last month, submitting it to the HBO U.S. Comedy Arts Film Festival.
http://www.zoomilk.com/WebsiteMoviePoster/MoviePosterMonsterlieben.jpg
escozooz
11-07-2005, 02:32 PM
Overall it looks great. Composition and concept.
- Stock lens flare is a no-no
- I think that the front characters should be crisper, no soft filter
- the poster lacks an overall color scheme
- try matching the skin tones a litte more
- The red title font lacks a little definition
This are some nit picky things. It is very subjective, so take these critiques for what they are worth. :engel017:
When can we see the film? I have to know if the man-beast gets the girl or not! :laugh:
Slimothy
11-07-2005, 02:42 PM
Overall it looks great. Composition and concept.
- Stock lens flare is a no-no
- I think that the front characters should be crisper, no soft filter
- the poster lacks an overall color scheme
- try matching the skin tones a litte more
- The red title font lacks a little definition
This are some nit picky things. It is very subjective, so take these critiques for what they are worth. :engel017:
When can we see the film? I have to know if the man-beast gets the girl or not! :laugh:
I second everything, especially the lens flare thing. Totally distracting and seems pointless. Good job, I remember seeing the trailer. Good to see it's getting submitted.
francheezie
11-09-2005, 09:58 AM
The stock lens flare was added for pure campiness. Someone said it looked like an 80's Goonies type poster. Please try and realize how funny a stock lens flare can be.
HorseFilms
11-09-2005, 10:45 AM
"Can a man-beast with the IQ of an 8-year-old find true love?"
It worked for me.:beer:
Cool poster!
Ought2bCommitted
11-09-2005, 03:04 PM
LOL
Funky concept! Like it!
As for the poster, didn't like it so much. Its not blended well. The actors look more like Colorforms than anything.
I don't really unerstand why you have a lens flare on the bottom of the poster either. Odd choice.
I think you just need to smooth it out a bit, blend the blacks more . The images just aren't gelling together for me.
-Robert
joemiked
11-10-2005, 12:29 PM
8 year old iq? smarter than me all ready!!!
www.mikedvideo.com