View Full Version : Insectarium. My first short with DVX
hal9000
09-23-2004, 08:08 PM
Here you can find it
Title: Insectarium.avi (23MB)
Download:
www.gerardogarcia.tk/
In the list that appears, click (right mouse button) the file Insectarium.avi and "Save Target as..."
Let me know your expert opinion.
Rgds. from an expat in Shanghai.
disjecta
09-23-2004, 09:12 PM
I thought it was pretty good. If it were me, I would have chosen different music. It was a little overbearing and should have been more subtle, IMO.
Most of the shots were well composed. The lighting was a little uneven, particularly at the end (the next morning?), it seemed a little dark.
The mom continuously shaking her head was a little annoying after a while but I wouldn't worry about that so much.
Overall, I think it was a good effort.
By the way, Quicktime is the preferred file format on this board because Mac users won't be able to view your file so I'd suggest you re-encode as a Quicktime file.
araujofh
09-24-2004, 05:12 AM
Yes, I agree with disjecta.
One question. What did you do with the grasshopper? You know it is against animal rights to kill them, right? :D Just joking!!!
All the best
Fidel.
I can't see it for some reason, ur link keeps taking me to this page: http://www.tripod.lycos.es/
araujofh
09-24-2004, 10:16 AM
I think the bandwidth quota has expired.