View Full Version : Defenseless by Marnie Mitchell-Lister

01-18-2012, 09:16 PM
CHANGED TO: "Animal Control" ---- STARTED A NEW THREAD - An independent young woman mistakenly puts herself in danger when she accepts help from her creepy apartment manager in an effort to trap a wounded cat.


01-19-2012, 11:24 AM
Welcome to the party!

01-22-2012, 01:43 PM
Just added the logline. Might have to make a new poster...don't like this one. But I figured if I posted one and got the thread started I'd have to finish the screenplay! :)

01-23-2012, 06:24 AM
Ugh...I don't think I have enought 'trapped' time to qualify. Dammit! :cry:

01-23-2012, 11:29 AM
Marnie: How are you measuring that? I'm kinda eyeballing and am at maybe 50%.

01-23-2012, 11:45 AM
I say 'most' will be decided by the voters unless I see something that glaringly doesn't meet the theme.

01-23-2012, 12:09 PM
I'm trying to get to 50%. I was eyeballing it by pages. Figured 6 pages I wanted at least 3 trapped the rest for set up. Trimming it back like crazy now hoping it doesn't leave holes. Been happening to me a lot lately. What's in my head not coming out right page wise when written. I'm getting pretty old though. That could be it. ;)

Yeah....I guess the voters will decide whether the story has enough 'trappededness'. :happy:

01-29-2012, 06:28 PM
Man...I seriously may have to bail. My story is really coming out sucky. Unless maybe I come up with a new idea in the next few days.

01-30-2012, 06:38 AM
My idea was thought up and written in one day and now is being polished.

01-30-2012, 07:05 AM
Damn you Keaton! Okay...still plenty of time...

02-04-2012, 10:38 AM
Changed to ANIMAL CONTROL....started a new thread under that title. :2vrolijk_08: