Out With the Old grabs

[mrblue1022]

Here are a few grabs from my short Out With the Old which I just finished. Thoughts?

Rob

http://www.geocities.com/mrblue1022/OWO1.jpg

http://www.geocities.com/mrblue1022/OWO2.jpg

http://www.geocities.com/mrblue1022/OWO3.jpg

[thartley]

Are those chronologically correct? I hope he is handing the gun BACK to the other guy after deciding NOT to pull the trigger! Pt up some clips when you can, but warn us of any, erm, loud bangs. I dont do well with loud bangs. I'd like to see some of it sometime, though.

[BLUESPIDER]

I don't see any grabs!! Where's your links?

[avatuar]

looks like u shot in squeeze mode. You need to squeeze the image down vetically to 16:9 to get the aspect ratio correct. I would also do a lot of CC to these, because it looks like it was all shot with existing light. Your result will look something like this
http://www.oasisdesignstudios.com/test1.jpg
The image also seemed out of focus? So I sized it down to bring back some of the resolution. Not at all trying to discourage you. Looks like you have some good composition and a great idea of what a movie background ought to look like! you just need a little more practice and your set! Experiment with lighting! It makes it night and day!

[BLUESPIDER]

weird, sometimes I see the grabs and sometimes I don't. They do look soft. Did you shoot with an anamprphic adapter?

[mrblue1022]

This was shot with an out of the box XL1. Actually this lighting is exactly the way I designed it. I wanted the room to have a natural feel so that it looked like it was just the practical light in the room. My DP was a big help in getting this look down right.

The grabs are actually not in order, the second and the third ones are backwards.

Thanks for the comments.

Rob