An internet spot for VARVOUZOS jewellery

[my?illu]

Shot on HPX-172 with CINEVATE Brevis and NIKON 50mm f1.2 AI-S, 24mm f1.4 AF-S & 85mm f1.4 AF-S.

Do let me know what you think! Any comments is much appreciated!


http://www.vimeo.com/17798630

[Everts]

I like your cinematography and I dont mind edgy commercials.

Now dont take this the wrong way ....but the first shot of the girl pressing on her knees looks likes she wants to take a dump and not a jump.... to me IMO. It looks to "I'm acting as if Im about to end it !"
It's different from juwellery spots. As a viewer Im getting two messages . We sell jewellery which you can wear when you want to inflict harm on your self and ofcourse we sell jewellery that's on the edge, literaly. Also for effect the shot of the girl on the egde of a builing? needed a little wind !

Visually I enjoyed it but as a commercial I'm not to sure about that.

Just an opionon !

[my?illu]

Haha! Thanks for your thoughts Everts! Watching it again, I see what you mean... Perhaps the fondling of the knees was a bad directing tip. At the moment of the shoot, it was supposed to represent nerves... But I guess people also fondle their knees when sitting on the porcelain throne!

Thanks for the compliments! I am new and learning and every comment helps!

[diego80]

I am sorry: where is the clip?