Menage a Trois

[obonin]

Hello DVXuser.com Users...

just wanted to share my new short:

http://madnomad.net/film/menage/menage.htm

Let me know what you guys think, and why you think so.

Thanks, Olivier. :-/

[Contact_Therapy]

Oh boy... :o

[J.R. Hudson]

A cute short. Sigh...

The perils of the gay couple. Tragic.

[windsorguy]

I think the "waking up" scene could use some work. Samuel's character looks to be showing all this emotion but instead of seeing his face, you just see his shiny head. Have him look at the camera more or better yet, move in closer. Have some close-ups of his partner's reaction as well. Other than that, I think two women and one guy would garner a better reception. ;D

[J.R. Hudson]

Yeah, on the eppeal level alone two women (hot of course) and a dude.

[windsorguy]

That's right John. And I will volunteer to be that dude. :D

[J.R. Hudson]

:D

Sigh...

The Lipstick Lesbians.

[obonin]

So I forgot to say that this movie was made in one day. From the original idea to the editing, including the music by Sam, everything.

Basically, the challenge was to do a movie in one day including:
- someone running away from a sordid past
- accidently squashing a tomato
- someone aspiring to be a singer
- close-up of a puckering mouth
...

[J.R. Hudson]

Well it was well done. Not great; not bad.

[HartStudio]

It was great!

I would have liked to see more nudity in the sex scene. ::)

At least on the girl. Even the guy could have showd some Azz. Show some skin baby! ;D

Sex sells even if the plot smells! Words to live by. :o

No man really, for one day, or 1 Month, it is awsome!

Out of all the movies I have seen here this is the only one that had a good tight plot, killer twist, and that I would watch over and over!

Where do I send my money, I want to see a full version of this!

[Contact_Therapy]

Smack My Bitch Up! :D

What ever happened to The Prodigy anyways?

[obonin]

hello all again. thanks for your comments.

I agree that the bed scene could be improved, sam should really show his face. but that's the drawback of one day shooting... but again i agree. next time, i'll do better. ;)

ok for the prodigy song... i'm seeking copyright access, and so in a week or two, it'll be all sorted out. (The Prodigy are touring right now, i think in europe)

And HartStudio, I appreciate your comments also. Even though we had only 8hours to do the entire thing, i was not going to come out of the brainstorming with a good idea. i love movies, and i love movies that have nice cinematography, nice acting, nice scenes, but above all i need a good story that's intelligent.

so thanks again. next one will hopefully have better technical aspect to it... and a good plot i hope.