"Facade" - Off Stage Films

[Chris Messineo]

http://www.offstagefilms.com/images/facade486x720.jpg

[Chris Messineo]

Production Still:

http://www.offstagefilms.com/images/facade03.jpg

[Chris Messineo]

Reserved

[Chris Messineo]

I hope we're not too late to the party.

The film is complete. We're just waiting on the score from Herman (we only gave him the film yesterday).

[ZazaCast]

Chris! Welcome... love your work. Can't wait to see what you came up with this time around.

[Rodney V. Smith]

Dude, glad to see you in. Welcome to the party!

[Mike@AF]

Being that it's only March 4th, I'd say you're just in time!

[Michael Anthony Horrigan]

Great stuff! The grab looks very nice.

MAH

[Scott F]

Killer poster!

[Richard J. Johnson]

Chris is back. Can't wait for it!

[Ki-Ki]

What a teasing grab!

[Chris Messineo]

Thanks everyone. I'm really excited to be back in another fest.

A quick warning though, this is another super short - a one page script - very minimalistic.

[Richard J. Johnson]

Thanks everyone. I'm really excited to be back in another fest.

A quick warning though, this is another super short - a one page script - very minimalistic.

Yeah but your super shorts are packed with so much emotion your films may not need to be any longer. The last one I saw was "one saved message" I believe and that had my wife crying.

[jasonthewho]

Thanks everyone. I'm really excited to be back in another fest.

A quick warning though, this is another super short - a one page script - very minimalistic.

Nothing wrong with that. I enjoyed your last short one. My last fest entry was around a minute as well.

[Chris_Keaton]

Hey, glad to see you join the party. I always dig your stuff.

[Chris Messineo]

Thanks guys. This short is a little over three minutes. I hope you dig it.

[vnguyen972]

Love your grab! Poster looks sharp!

Looking forward seeing it!

[Mike@AF]

I like how sharp and clean the poster is. Looks awesome!

[Chris_Marrs_Piliero]

one page script? nice... i like minimalistic... solid poster...

[Hermn8r]

Welcome in! Looking forward to hearing more about this film!

[Chris Messineo]

Thanks again.

We're just waiting on the music - which should be arriving shortly (fingers crossed).

[Chris Messineo]

OMG OMG OMG

So, I just got the music from Herman, I open up Final Cut Pro drop the track in place and my laptop locks up. No big deal I think, I power off and try and reboot and now my MacBook Pro won't boot at all. It just stops at the loading screen.

The first appointment I could get at the Apple Store is 12:45 today. If they can't fix this I'm going to cry.

[chriscurl]

That sucks! Good luck man...

[jasonthewho]

That sucks!

Have you tried holding down command and s as you reboot?
Then type in fsck -f and hit enter
then reboot when it's done fixing stuff
Might work...

[RodThompson]

That's shit-liuck, Chris!

You have time! Now just have faith.

[Chris Messineo]

I have a backup of everything - I just hope they can fix it in the store.

If I get a new HD it's going to take a long time to restore from Time Machine and then I still have to encode and upload.

It might be a very long night.

[Alan H. Chang]

You'll make it Chris.

[pborghee]

Good luck man! Have fun this weekend knocking out these films.

[hoz]

just read your thread - - you will make it!!!! keep your head up!!!

[Chris Messineo]

I just got back from the Apple store. They were able to restore the operating system (which got corrupted), so I am back in business. :)

[AJ Brooks]

Awesome!

[nils_dvx]

looking forward to seeing your film. good luck!

-Nils


"Recession" by Nils David Peterson -- DVXUSER Betrayalfest 2010 (http://www.dvxuser.com/V6/showthread.php?t=201885)

[nils_dvx]

looking forward to seeing your film. good luck!

-Nils


"Recession" by Nils David Peterson -- DVXUSER Betrayalfest 2010 (http://www.dvxuser.com/V6/showthread.php?t=201885)

[Chris Messineo]

I spoke too soon. My laptop crashed again.

[Rodney V. Smith]

did you manage to back it up at least? Or get the files off onto an external harddrive?

[Chris Messineo]

I have all my files backed up, so long term, I'll be fine. But at the moment, I have no way to export my movie. :(

[Richard J. Johnson]

Dammit!! I will think it into existence. You have to make it. and you will.

[Chris Messineo]

I am working with a friend and his machine to try and make this happen. I haven't completely given up yet.

[Chris Messineo]

My laptop is up and running again. At this moment, I am exporting as fast as it can and hopefully I can get it uploaded before the next crash comes.

[John LaBonney]

Chris:

Best of luck! I'm looking forward to watching your film!

John

[Chris Messineo]

It's official - we're in. What a day. I can't wait to get a good night's sleep and then start watching some awesome short films tomorrow.

[mark menditto]

That's great news. Good luck to everyone!

[AJ Brooks]

This thread gave me flashbacks to my last entry.

Glad to hear you got it submitted! Looking forward to it.

[totitefilms]

Congrats! Your poster gives chicken skin ;-)

[Chris Messineo]

Congrats! Your poster gives chicken skin ;-)

I hope that's a good thing. :)

[RodThompson]

Indeed! Your poster makes for happy mud saucing of fruit elastic (makes me poop in my underwear with excitement)!

[Matt Harris]

i love minimalism. i think i'll shoot for that next time around. i managed to keep my short at 3.5 minutes and that was HARD, so im interested to see how you told a story in one page. very cool.

[Richard J. Johnson]

Gut wrenching and powerful. Simply put. Damn man, I love your work. love it.

[Chris Messineo]

Gut wrenching and powerful. Simply put. Damn man, I love your work. love it.
Thank you so much. That means the world to me.

[Chris_Keaton]

Loved this! Great film. I appreciate the internal betrayal. Such emotion for a small piece. Great job!

[Chris Messineo]

Loved this! Great film. I appreciate the internal betrayal. Such emotion for a small piece. Great job!
Your such a talented writer, I'm thrilled to hear that you dug our little story and the internal struggle. Thank you.

[Matias Caruso]

Loved this film.

A very touching character moment. It’s impressive how much you said about this woman in just three minutes and without one line of dialogue spoken.

Congrats to you, and to everyone involved. You should be proud. :beer:

[PaulJWilliams9]

Hey Chris, just checked this out.

You captured such raw, visceral human emotion here. Powerful and identifiable. I thought the music choice was very unique. I could see others using the typical sad piano or violin, but this was strangely effective.

And Alex was great, she's got some talent there.

You're inspirational!

-Paul

[Michael Anthony Horrigan]

Story: Interesting betrayal. Very well done. Simple but effective.

Acting: The acting was great and I almost feel slightly cheated. I wanted to hear her grief.
No words were needed but I felt hearing her just a little would have given you more impact considering how well she seemed to pull off that scene.

Technical: The music was good, Herman always does a great job. The style was very offsetting and I think that actually fit quite well. This also looked great and the minor effects were very good.

Great short film.

MAH

[RodThompson]

Wow, Chris. This was nothing short of powerful emotion on tap! Your actress was above and beyond, and I found myself locked into her sadness and self-loathing. And of course, none of that would matter without the awesome style in which this was shot.

KUDOS!

[Chris Messineo]

Loved this film.

A very touching character moment. It’s impressive how much you said about this woman in just three minutes and without one line of dialogue spoken.

Congrats to you, and to everyone involved. You should be proud. :beer:

I love silent films and I wanted to try and do something personal and intimate. I'm so glad you liked it.


You captured such raw, visceral human emotion here. Powerful and identifiable. I thought the music choice was very unique. I could see others using the typical sad piano or violin, but this was strangely effective.

And Alex was great, she's got some talent there.

Thank you very much. I lover Herman's score. He never goes for the obvious choice musically. Alex is only 17 and I was amazed at how brave she was with her performance. I'll be sure to pass on your compliments.


Story: Interesting betrayal. Very well done. Simple but effective.

Acting: The acting was great and I almost feel slightly cheated. I wanted to hear her grief.
No words were needed but I felt hearing her just a little would have given you more impact considering how well she seemed to pull off that scene.

Technical: The music was good, Herman always does a great job. The style was very offsetting and I think that actually fit quite well. This also looked great and the minor effects were very good.

Great short film.

Thank you so much for the detailed review. It means a lot to me coming from you - I love your films. I understand about the silence. I went back and forth on that, but there was something about the absence of sound that was haunting to me (maybe I'm just strange that way). Anyway, I'm so happy that you liked the film. You made my day.


Wow, Chris. This was nothing short of powerful emotion on tap! Your actress was above and beyond, and I found myself locked into her sadness and self-loathing. And of course, none of that would matter without the awesome style in which this was shot.

KUDOS!

Honestly, I didn't expect so many positive reactions. I'm thrilled that you liked it as well. We had a very small team, but everyone was so great. I'm so happy for Alex - this wasn't easy. I'll be sure to tell her you were impressed. Thanks again and I'm looking forward to watching your documentary.

[DerSpieler]

Hey Chris, good to see you in the fest.

Excellent film. I love how your stories are always so simple but emotionally charged. This is no exception. Powerful stuff. Your lead actress is fantastic.

At first I wasn't sure about the music. It's good but it didn't seem fitting. I guess that was your intention to some extent but it did feel a little light given the situation.

Great job all round, though. Best of luck!

[Stephen Mick]

I've posted a review of "Façade" over at F.E.D.…

http://www.filmeveryday.com/2010/03/07/facade-a-dvxuser-betrayal-fest-film/

Congrats, Chris on a really powerful piece of work.

[Prystauk]

Beautiful work. Short and subtle, the film captured definitively captured what I've seen from student "cutters". Alexandra Landau was absolutely wonderful in expressing both her vulnerability as well as her beauty. She conveyed the transformation from cutting herself to euphoria very well - as if she just had a "pick me up" from a cup of coffee like the average person. The setting was perfect, a clean and bright, white bathroom in direct opposition to the darkness of the emotional situation. Excellent contrast. The music was perfect and only enhanced what was on screen. Extremely well done.

[MrSeth]

My critique for Facade
The story:
AMAZING! So much was told in that one scene... very dark and mysterious, yet calm and felt very "real." We all hurt ourselves. She's such a beautiful girl and I love how you introduce us to her imperfections in such a subtle manner.

The acting:
She did GREAT! The emotions she portrayed were brilliant... the scene with her crying was touching and real.

The camerawork:
Beautiful... loved how you worked with tight shots a lot to tell the story. One issue with color I noticed was that the contrast was very different in a lot of the same shots.. but nevertheless, I liked how it all came together.

The editing:
Very smooth.. very "cutty" at times but that only enhanced the story... it jarred me a little but I could understand the intent you were going for. Good job!

The sound and music:
Liked the silence... music was perfectly composed and synced in!

Overall impression:
One word: beautiful

My favorite shot:
http://img691.imageshack.us/img691/9695/screenshot20100307at104.png

[MML]

Very powerful Chris. This hit home for me because my beautiful daughter is a cutter. The performance from this actress was so authentic.

You reallly nailed this emotional subject. Excellent work.

[LinB]

A very powerful film. I have two teenage kids and I am very aware of the issues of self-harming. You give a very important voice to a controversial issue which all teenagers should be aware of. Very well done.

[pborghee]

Very powerful! There is alot of girls/guys out there that suffer from this and I think you caught the whole image perfectly. There is a website that is for cutters that are stopping and trying to make their lives better. www.twloha.com (http://www.twloha.com) would be awesome if you got with them and they showed this on their website. Anyways back to the film, loved all of it. If i did have to have a complaint it would be hard to find but i wish their was actual talking. Maybe if we the girl said stuff we might have connected more I dont know. Overall amazing job.

[Tim Joy]

Really liked this one Chris. Alexandra was engaging and the opening shots are great.

While I didn't see the cutting coming, and I was thinking, 'Oh no, is she going to kill herself?' I did see the ending coming, just because of the title, but it's more about the journey anyway, so it's a minor thing.

I agree with Mike that I wanted to hear the sound at some points. Just some breath or movement might have made it more intimate in parts, then kick in the music for the montage sections. I'm a little unsure about the music though. I can't really explain it, but it seems to play against the piece for me. I like it on its own, but not so much for the film.

Congrats on a solid entry!

[Chris Messineo]

Excellent film. I love how your stories are always so simple but emotionally charged. This is no exception. Powerful stuff. Your lead actress is fantastic.

At first I wasn't sure about the music. It's good but it didn't seem fitting. I guess that was your intention to some extent but it did feel a little light given the situation.

Great job all round, though. Best of luck!

I love character pieces and I'm so happy that you liked this too.


I've posted a review of "Façade" over at F.E.D.…

http://www.filmeveryday.com/2010/03/07/facade-a-dvxuser-betrayal-fest-film/

Congrats, Chris on a really powerful piece of work.

Your review is amazing. I feel truly honored. Thank you so very much.


Beautiful work. Short and subtle, the film captured definitively captured what I've seen from student "cutters". Alexandra Landau was absolutely wonderful in expressing both her vulnerability as well as her beauty. She conveyed the transformation from cutting herself to euphoria very well - as if she just had a "pick me up" from a cup of coffee like the average person. The setting was perfect, a clean and bright, white bathroom in direct opposition to the darkness of the emotional situation. Excellent contrast. The music was perfect and only enhanced what was on screen. Extremely well done.

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it so much and I will pass along your compliments to Alex.


The story:
AMAZING! So much was told in that one scene... very dark and mysterious, yet calm and felt very "real." We all hurt ourselves. She's such a beautiful girl and I love how you introduce us to her imperfections in such a subtle manner.

The acting:
She did GREAT! The emotions she portrayed were brilliant... the scene with her crying was touching and real.

The camerawork:
Beautiful... loved how you worked with tight shots a lot to tell the story. One issue with color I noticed was that the contrast was very different in a lot of the same shots.. but nevertheless, I liked how it all came together.

The editing:
Very smooth.. very "cutty" at times but that only enhanced the story... it jarred me a little but I could understand the intent you were going for. Good job!

The sound and music:
Liked the silence... music was perfectly composed and synced in!

Overall impression:
One word: beautiful

Thank you very much for the detailed review. I appreciate all the criticism and I'm so happy that you liked it.


Very powerful Chris. This hit home for me because my beautiful daughter is a cutter. The performance from this actress was so authentic.

You reallly nailed this emotional subject. Excellent work.

Wow. Thank you for sharing that. It means a lot to me.


A very powerful film. I have two teenage kids and I am very aware of the issues of self-harming. You give a very important voice to a controversial issue which all teenagers should be aware of. Very well done.

Thank you very much.


Very powerful! There is alot of girls/guys out there that suffer from this and I think you caught the whole image perfectly. There is a website that is for cutters that are stopping and trying to make their lives better. www.twloha.com (http://www.twloha.com) would be awesome if you got with them and they showed this on their website. Anyways back to the film, loved all of it. If i did have to have a complaint it would be hard to find but i wish their was actual talking. Maybe if we the girl said stuff we might have connected more I dont know. Overall amazing job.

Thanks. We tried to tell a personal story, but if it resonates then that is very cool.


Really liked this one Chris. Alexandra was engaging and the opening shots are great.

While I didn't see the cutting coming, and I was thinking, 'Oh no, is she going to kill herself?' I did see the ending coming, just because of the title, but it's more about the journey anyway, so it's a minor thing.

I agree with Mike that I wanted to hear the sound at some points. Just some breath or movement might have made it more intimate in parts, then kick in the music for the montage sections. I'm a little unsure about the music though. I can't really explain it, but it seems to play against the piece for me. I like it on its own, but not so much for the film.

Congrats on a solid entry!

Thanks for the review and the suggestions. I'm glad you liked it.

[Mike@AF]

Great work! You kept it short and simple, which helped make it an even more powerful film. Loved how you did it all visually with no words. I think that makes it even more effective and powerful as well.

[Aaron Marshall]

Great going Chris. I loved the writing. It was simple. I'm already sick and tired of 2-3 twists being put into these 5-6 minute movies in Betrayal fest. "Give me a break", I've been exclaiming, and this film gave me that break. I appreciate your simple and elegant motif, one fitting for a 5 minute short.

The young woman did a wonderful job acting it all out. Part of it was hard to watch because it felt so real. She was a great choice for the role.

[crlncxn]

It's a subject that is very close to me as you will know from 'Just a Moment' and 'Going Unnoticed' and I think you have captured the emotions very, very well.

Many congratulations to the actress. Many many.

I loved the visuals - especially the mirror scene.

I'm afraid I didn't like the soundtrack though - took me out of it. Didn't, for me, capture the mood. Sounded like night time in a jazz bar or something. Sorry.

Loved the thought of the girl betraying herself. A profound use of the subject.

[Matt Harris]

Chris, great job. This is such a serious subject matter and you handled it with respect and subtlety.
I think Herman did the score? Herman if you're listening i LOVE this track. I would totally listen to it
if i had an mp3 of it (hint hint). Back to the short, it's so simple yet effective. I think you should add some sort of a title card at the end and use use this as a PSA. it's great man, nicely done.

[Luis_]

Awesome job Chris!
great job by the actress too!

I saw the whole thing about these kids doing stuff like that on a news special last year.
once again, awesome work, keep-em' coming!

[Chris Messineo]

Great work! You kept it short and simple, which helped make it an even more powerful film. Loved how you did it all visually with no words. I think that makes it even more effective and powerful as well.

Thank you. I love silent films and I'm so happy you liked ours.


Great going Chris. I loved the writing. It was simple. I'm already sick and tired of 2-3 twists being put into these 5-6 minute movies in Betrayal fest. "Give me a break", I've been exclaiming, and this film gave me that break. I appreciate your simple and elegant motif, one fitting for a 5 minute short.

The young woman did a wonderful job acting it all out. Part of it was hard to watch because it felt so real. She was a great choice for the role.

Thanks. I thought it might be interesting to look at self betrayal.

I'm thrilled that you liked Alex's performance. She actually auditioned for us over a year ago for "One Saved Message". She wasn't right for that part, but I remembered her and I wrote this specifically for her. I'm really proud of her performance.


It's a subject that is very close to me as you will know from 'Just a Moment' and 'Going Unnoticed' and I think you have captured the emotions very, very well.

Many congratulations to the actress. Many many.

I loved the visuals - especially the mirror scene.

I'm afraid I didn't like the soundtrack though - took me out of it. Didn't, for me, capture the mood. Sounded like night time in a jazz bar or something. Sorry.

Loved the thought of the girl betraying herself. A profound use of the subject.

Thanks for watching it. I like that the music goes against type, but I understand it doesn't work for everybody.

Still, I'm so glad you liked the actress and the emotions resonated for you.


Chris, great job. This is such a serious subject matter and you handled it with respect and subtlety.
I think Herman did the score? Herman if you're listening i LOVE this track. I would totally listen to it
if i had an mp3 of it (hint hint). Back to the short, it's so simple yet effective. I think you should add some sort of a title card at the end and use use this as a PSA. it's great man, nicely done.

I'm sure Herman would be happy to oblige. Thanks for the compliments.


Awesome job Chris! great job by the actress too!

I saw the whole thing about these kids doing stuff like that on a news special last year.
once again, awesome work, keep-em' coming!

Thanks a lot. These fests are addictive and I hope to be in many more to come.

[ZazaCast]

This was great Chris! Having two daughters, I can really relate. Not only did you address 'cutting' but (to me at least) body image
issues that run rampant in today's society and torture girls, young ladies and even women these days.

Camera work & lighting worked nicely...your actress did a great job.

Solid film.:thumbsup:

[Ben Sliker]

Chris,

I find that the most effective short films are the ones that take a very simple concept, be it a thought, a moment in time, and dig deep into what that very small thing means to the world.

This was done marvelously in Facade. This was hard for me to watch, at times I had my fist over my mouth and was peeking at my computer screen with one eye. (if only to keep continuity for myself.) I was never a cutter, but I had friends who were and you certainly did the topic justice.

On the technical side, I felt as though the color correction and lighting were a bit inconsistent, but by the middle of the film, all of that took a back seat to the content. Very powerful emotional effect for me, one that was quite unexpected. I hope you don't mind when I say I won't be watching it again.

Thanks for sharing!
-ben

[hoz]

this was a powerful film. your actress did one tremendous job!

simple, strong, hard to watch. so hurtful.

well done!

congrats!

[4100xpb]

I applaud you for taking on a potentially very controversial subject.

The music was very unique, and very fitting. It definitely made the mood. Technically, the film was excellent. I thought the lighting in particular was nice, gentle but revealing. The slow-motion on the final walk down the stairs was fantastic.

Storywise, I know I'm going against the grain, but I don’t see the betrayal? Or perhaps I should say the point I see being made doesn’t strike me as betrayal. I see this film less as a story, and more as a portrait of your (very well acted) young character. After a time, I found myself thinking “this intro is going on rather long” and then the title flashed, and the movie was over.

Overall, I think your technical skills are excellent, and I appreciate your willingness to tackle tough subjects. I just struggle with this story as the best venue to exhibit your talents. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

[KhamIsk]

I could understand your movie so many different ways which is great!

The actress is great and I guess her wonderful acting has to do with the strong direction.

Very powerful movie, I think.

[seanmcleod]

I liked the film, technically sound, acted well. My only concern is that I don't know if I felt the issue of cutting was really dealt with, so much as it was shown. I would have liked to see more of the repercussions of her actions, because as is, I think it seems as though she cuts herself, feels better and moves on. I don't think it gets at why this makes her feel better, or reveals the psyche behind why this is her personal answer to her body image issues. Regardless I applaud the ingenuity and creativity in telling a very original betrayal story. Nicely done.

[Chris Messineo]

This was great Chris! Having two daughters, I can really relate. Not only did you address 'cutting' but (to me at least) body image
issues that run rampant in today's society and torture girls, young ladies and even women these days.

Camera work & lighting worked nicely...your actress did a great job.

Thanks a lot. Like I said earlier, we wanted to tell one person's story, but if it resonates beyond, that is very cool.


Chris,

I find that the most effective short films are the ones that take a very simple concept, be it a thought, a moment in time, and dig deep into what that very small thing means to the world.

This was done marvelously in Facade. This was hard for me to watch, at times I had my fist over my mouth and was peeking at my computer screen with one eye. (if only to keep continuity for myself.) I was never a cutter, but I had friends who were and you certainly did the topic justice.

On the technical side, I felt as though the color correction and lighting were a bit inconsistent, but by the middle of the film, all of that took a back seat to the content. Very powerful emotional effect for me, one that was quite unexpected. I hope you don't mind when I say I won't be watching it again.

We knew going into this that the film would work or not work based on the performance. I'm thrilled that you liked Alex and that her performance helped cover up for any of my filmmaking shortcomings. :)


this was a powerful film. your actress did one tremendous job!

simple, strong, hard to watch. so hurtful.

well done!

congrats!

Thanks. As tough as it was to watch, we actually had a great time filming it. We only had a 3 person crew, but you could feel a real bond on set. It was kind of special.


I applaud you for taking on a potentially very controversial subject.

The music was very unique, and very fitting. It definitely made the mood. Technically, the film was excellent. I thought the lighting in particular was nice, gentle but revealing. The slow-motion on the final walk down the stairs was fantastic.

Storywise, I know I'm going against the grain, but I don’t see the betrayal? Or perhaps I should say the point I see being made doesn’t strike me as betrayal. I see this film less as a story, and more as a portrait of your (very well acted) young character. After a time, I found myself thinking “this intro is going on rather long” and then the title flashed, and the movie was over.

Overall, I think your technical skills are excellent, and I appreciate your willingness to tackle tough subjects. I just struggle with this story as the best venue to exhibit your talents. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Thanks for your honest critique. That's cool that you liked those last shots. We shot them at regular speed and slow motion, but the slow motion just felt right in the edit.

I agree this is an unusual story, especially for betrayal, but honestly this is the kind of film I am drawn towards and the kind of story I like to tell. I realize it may not be for everyone, but I'm not sure I could change my voice (even if I wanted too). I hope that makes sense.


I could understand your movie so many different ways which is great!

The actress is great and I guess her wonderful acting has to do with the strong direction.

Very powerful movie, I think.

Thank you so much. Alex deserves all the credit. I just tried to create and environment where she would be comfortable to take risks.


I liked the film, technically sound, acted well. My only concern is that I don't know if I felt the issue of cutting was really dealt with, so much as it was shown. I would have liked to see more of the repercussions of her actions, because as is, I think it seems as though she cuts herself, feels better and moves on. I don't think it gets at why this makes her feel better, or reveals the psyche behind why this is her personal answer to her body image issues. Regardless I applaud the ingenuity and creativity in telling a very original betrayal story. Nicely done.

Thanks for the review. I'm not sure anyone could deal with "cutting" in three and half minutes. I just wanted to show one young woman's moment of self betrayal - although I realize that makes for a bit of an unusual story.

[Maximus]

Well done, Chris. This is an issue I know very little about.

Have you considered using it as a PSA? I'm sure that some national organization could make great use of it.

[killacam]

I thought this was very moving- kind of simple but really effective. Probably one of the most emotionally involving films of the fest. Well shot and edited. I liked the jump cuts and the music was very good as well.

[SonicStates]

Chris, finally a chance to comment on Facade.
First of all, I really appreciate any artist that makes legitimate social commentary through their chosen medium. Facade does this powerfully and in no small part because of your lead. Like others have commented here, the simplicity allowed for us to become involved in your character and story.
Like you, I enjoy 'silent' movies. It seems these days I am enjoying them more and more. A lot of the time I feel like there is a constant drone of badly written dialogue waiting for me when I turn on the TV, so Facade was refreshing. The music was great; complimented the movie beautifully.
Thank you.
Sam.

[vnguyen972]

what can I say... great performance from the actress... are those cuts real? okay, that isn't a question but it does look painful... kudos for that... great job over all!

[Chris Messineo]

First of all, I really appreciate any artist that makes legitimate social commentary through their chosen medium. Facade does this powerfully and in no small part because of your lead. Like others have commented here, the simplicity allowed for us to become involved in your character and story.
Like you, I enjoy 'silent' movies. It seems these days I am enjoying them more and more. A lot of the time I feel like there is a constant drone of badly written dialogue waiting for me when I turn on the TV, so Facade was refreshing. The music was great; complimented the movie beautifully.

Thank you very much. I'm so glad you liked it our silent film. This is the fourth silent film I've made and I like the challenge of trying to tell a story without words.


what can I say... great performance from the actress... are those cuts real? okay, that isn't a question but it does look painful... kudos for that... great job over all!

Thanks a lot. I have some stories to tell about the cuts, but I want to wait until after everyone has had a chance to see the film. Anyway, I'm really happy you liked it.


Well done, Chris. This is an issue I know very little about.

Have you considered using it as a PSA? I'm sure that some national organization could make great use of it.

Thanks for the suggestion. For the moment, we were just trying to complete it in time for DVXuser. I have no idea what will become of it after that.


I thought this was very moving- kind of simple but really effective. Probably one of the most emotionally involving films of the fest. Well shot and edited. I liked the jump cuts and the music was very good as well.

Thank you. I'm touched that you found it moving.

[EVH]

Really stunning, Chris.

Here's what I love: You came to a contest begging for treasonous plot twists and turncoat antagonists, and waded in with an absolutely heartbreaking statement on the inner disappointment that tons of people see in the mirror every morning.

That's brave and I DIG that. Congratulations.

Erich

P.S.
My wife walked by while I was watching it and said "Wow, that looks great. Who did that?" So there's the technical side of my review...

[Homunculus]

wow man..that was hard to watch. heart breaking and visceral.. amazing performance by this young lady. very hard hitting I still have chills in my spine from this. one of the only 3 films or so I'd say so far that really chilled me emotionally and struck a chord.
only minor gripe is that to me personally not sure if the music, it's in that sort of generic modern/current style that makes the film sound/seem more like a skin-care advertisment/info-mercial of sorts whereas something a little more traditional oriented (less electronic/synth elements) perhaps would have suited the emotional impact of it better..just my opinion though.

[dre83]

Very nice story.. simple... and very nice.

I do miss some of the handling sounds though...

[4100xpb]

Thanks for your honest critique. That's cool that you liked those last shots. We shot them at regular speed and slow motion, but the slow motion just felt right in the edit.

I agree this is an unusual story, especially for betrayal, but honestly this is the kind of film I am drawn towards and the kind of story I like to tell. I realize it may not be for everyone, but I'm not sure I could change my voice (even if I wanted too). I hope that makes sense.

Thanks Chris. Definitely don't change your voice (particularly based on anonymous critiques from the internet :P), you have a very strong one. While this wasn't my particular cup of tea, you clearly touched a lot of people with this. Keep making films that you are passionate about. Not everyone will get it, but it will be worth it for the ones who do. All the best.

[Shawn Philip Nelson]

wow, this was tough! Which is a big compliment, because it felt so real. Great acting and direction. Amazing score by Herman which really sells the emotion.

I felt the cinematography was a little underinspired. It could have been more interesting to have her just having gotten out of the shower (shooting around stuff, clever blocking, etc to not show anything), though I dont know the age of the actress so that probably was a no go.

Well done, difficult, a good film

[Chris Messineo]

Really stunning, Chris.

Here's what I love: You came to a contest begging for treasonous plot twists and turncoat antagonists, and waded in with an absolutely heartbreaking statement on the inner disappointment that tons of people see in the mirror every morning.

That's brave and I DIG that. Congratulations.

Erich

P.S.
My wife walked by while I was watching it and said "Wow, that looks great. Who did that?" So there's the technical side of my review...

Very cool. I'm thrilled that you dug it.


wow man..that was hard to watch. heart breaking and visceral.. amazing performance by this young lady. very hard hitting I still have chills in my spine from this. one of the only 3 films or so I'd say so far that really chilled me emotionally and struck a chord.
only minor gripe is that to me personally not sure if the music, it's in that sort of generic modern/current style that makes the film sound/seem more like a skin-care advertisment/info-mercial of sorts whereas something a little more traditional oriented (less electronic/synth elements) perhaps would have suited the emotional impact of it better..just my opinion though.

Thanks for the great review. I will be sure to tell the actress what you thought of her. It seems like people other love or hate the music - at least it inspires strong reactions (and that is always a good thing). :)


Very nice story.. simple... and very nice.

I do miss some of the handling sounds though...

We recorded sound, but during the edit there was something about the absence of sound that I really liked for this film - but, I'm strange like that.


Thanks Chris. Definitely don't change your voice (particularly based on anonymous critiques from the internet :P), you have a very strong one. While this wasn't my particular cup of tea, you clearly touched a lot of people with this. Keep making films that you are passionate about. Not everyone will get it, but it will be worth it for the ones who do. All the best.

It's all cool. As I said, I truly appreciate the honest feedback. I don't know that it's possible to make a film for everyone - so I will definitely try to stay true to my inner voice (that makes it sound like I'm hearing voices). But you know what I mean. :)


wow, this was tough! Which is a big compliment, because it felt so real. Great acting and direction. Amazing score by Herman which really sells the emotion.

I felt the cinematography was a little underinspired. It could have been more interesting to have her just having gotten out of the shower (shooting around stuff, clever blocking, etc to not show anything), though I dont know the age of the actress so that probably was a no go.

Well done, difficult, a good film

The actress is 17. For me, the character is so "naked" emotionally, I felt like that was enough. Anyway, thanks for the compliments, I'm touched this felt real and that it effected you.

[dougspice]

I think this is first of the fest I have seen where the betrayal is entirely internal to a character. For that matter it's certainly the only one I've seen where there IS only one character! It certainly stands out.

You really took a difficult subject matter head-on. That did make it hard to watch, but here's to making that choice! I thought your casting was great, and since that's 80% of the movie in this case, it held up.

I found myself wanting just a little bit more from the ending. What you have is lovely, but what I wanted to see was the outside world. We've spent the whole film up until this point in this character's secret world. Her ugliest place. And now at the end we have her stepping out into the glamorous facade world – so I found I wanted to see that world. Wanted to see the reverse shot of mom and dad looking so proud of their beautiful daughter, not having a clue about the lie she's carrying.

Having said all that, I'd actually like to hear your thoughts on what the betrayal was to you and to the actress.

[seanmcleod]

Thanks for the review. I'm not sure anyone could deal with "cutting" in three and half minutes. I just wanted to show one young woman's moment of self betrayal - although I realize that makes for a bit of an unusual story.

I agree it's a very complex issue and trying to "solve" it would be impossible, especially in such a short time frame. And the way you described it there, one young woman's moment of self betrayal actually makes it work a lot better for me. You weren't trying to comment one way or the other, but rather show that this occurs. And that for me makes the film work now. This is definitely a film that will affect everyone in a very different and personal way.

[Nemesis TS]

The story isn't my cup of tea. The acting was nothing short of genius. The girl showed us some raw emotion, which I would like to have heard. The music was oddly fitting so that was great. I feel that great acting is from great directing.

The only misstep I think was the end. The way she was revealed, I felt like you were going for sexy, which didn't feel appropriate for her age. I don't think you needed to give her a black dress and black pumps to make her look good. I think we get the point if she just heads off to school dressed normally with a smile on her face, books in hand.

[ChrisHurn]

Fantastic opening shot. Great actress. Really good look about her. No dialogue but the film carried itself perfectly well. By the way I really like your off stage films logo, that’s simple and effective.

What I like about this was the transition from curiosity to all the other emotions that come with that. Nicely shot, has a very close, personal feel to it. This is a very honest film. I really like that about it.

Herman’s score is excellent - one of the best of the fest IMO. Like how it builds to the 2:15ish mark, those aggressive sounds work really well. Lovely ending shot.

Memorable Moment
This whole film was memorable to me, the opening shot was my favourite, I liked the light in the left hand side. I like how it transitions with the final shot, that’s nice.

In my top 5, one of my favourite films of the fest. Congratulations.

[Geoff_R]

Enjoyed this one, Chris. I like that it gives us nothing but a simple moment and it's up to the viewer to interpret it however he or she wishes. The music is haunting and well fitted to the rest of the piece. Your actress did a good job of keeping my attention and I believed in her performance. I think you managed to capture an authentic moment of self-study... and the ending to me is the most interesting bit of all... she doesn't appear to be looking off screen at someone, but rather at 'us' the audience. If she were looking off camera, I'd say she's searching for acceptance or looking to impress for the short term... but to 'us', I feel like she's addressing society as a whole with a much longer train of thought.

There is a theory that we gain identity through others' perceptions in society, that ultimately how others see 'us' will eventually shape our development. We see a struggling teenage girl sorting through some issues within herself, but to society, she appears to be a confident, beautiful young woman.

Which leads me to believe that you might be illustrating that the facade is in fact the girl in the bathroom and not the girl on the stairs... the girl cutting herself is the superficial and temporary face of her nature... especially if I go along with the theory that society shapes identity... not sure what you intended :) This is where my own interpretations come into play...

Anyway, thanks for sharing. Enjoyed the film!

[Chris Messineo]

I think this is first of the fest I have seen where the betrayal is entirely internal to a character. For that matter it's certainly the only one I've seen where there IS only one character! It certainly stands out.

You really took a difficult subject matter head-on. That did make it hard to watch, but here's to making that choice! I thought your casting was great, and since that's 80% of the movie in this case, it held up.

I found myself wanting just a little bit more from the ending. What you have is lovely, but what I wanted to see was the outside world. We've spent the whole film up until this point in this character's secret world. Her ugliest place. And now at the end we have her stepping out into the glamorous facade world – so I found I wanted to see that world. Wanted to see the reverse shot of mom and dad looking so proud of their beautiful daughter, not having a clue about the lie she's carrying.

Having said all that, I'd actually like to hear your thoughts on what the betrayal was to you and to the actress.

Thanks for the detailed review and for sharing your thoughts on the ending. I do have an opinion about the "self betrayal" that is portrayed, but I almost hate to talk about it. I think it either moves you or it doesn't and I don't think my words can help.

I will say this, before we shot, Alex and I spent a little time alone talking about the character - we didn't focus on details, we talked instead about pain, emptiness, despair, and betrayal. We talked about cutting as a means of escape. I couldn't tell you how it defined her character - that was a personal decision she had to make, but hopefully you can feel it all in her performance.


I agree it's a very complex issue and trying to "solve" it would be impossible, especially in such a short time frame. And the way you described it there, one young woman's moment of self betrayal actually makes it work a lot better for me. You weren't trying to comment one way or the other, but rather show that this occurs. And that for me makes the film work now. This is definitely a film that will affect everyone in a very different and personal way.

Thanks for thinking about it and sharing your second thoughts. I haven't had a chance to get to your film yet, but I definitely will and I'm really looking forward to it.


The story isn't my cup of tea. The acting was nothing short of genius. The girl showed us some raw emotion, which I would like to have heard. The music was oddly fitting so that was great. I feel that great acting is from great directing.

The only misstep I think was the end. The way she was revealed, I felt like you were going for sexy, which didn't feel appropriate for her age. I don't think you needed to give her a black dress and black pumps to make her look good. I think we get the point if she just heads off to school dressed normally with a smile on her face, books in hand.

I truly appreciate your honesty. I knew this wouldn't be for everyone and I was actually surprised at how many seem to like it.


Fantastic opening shot. Great actress. Really good look about her. No dialogue but the film carried itself perfectly well. By the way I really like your off stage films logo, that’s simple and effective.

What I like about this was the transition from curiosity to all the other emotions that come with that. Nicely shot, has a very close, personal feel to it. This is a very honest film. I really like that about it.

Herman’s score is excellent - one of the best of the fest IMO. Like how it builds to the 2:15ish mark, those aggressive sounds work really well. Lovely ending shot.

Memorable Moment
This whole film was memorable to me, the opening shot was my favourite, I liked the light in the left hand side. I like how it transitions with the final shot, that’s nice.

In my top 5, one of my favourite films of the fest. Congratulations.

Thank you so much! I am a big fan of your music and I am honored that this made your top five.

I will be sure to pass along your compliments to Herman, Alex (our actress), and Mark (our DP).

That's cool that you like the logo - you wouldn't believe how many designs we went through before we settled on something so simple. :)


Enjoyed this one, Chris. I like that it gives us nothing but a simple moment and it's up to the viewer to interpret it however he or she wishes. The music is haunting and well fitted to the rest of the piece. Your actress did a good job of keeping my attention and I believed in her performance. I think you managed to capture an authentic moment of self-study... and the ending to me is the most interesting bit of all... she doesn't appear to be looking off screen at someone, but rather at 'us' the audience. If she were looking off camera, I'd say she's searching for acceptance or looking to impress for the short term... but to 'us', I feel like she's addressing society as a whole with a much longer train of thought.

There is a theory that we gain identity through others' perceptions in society, that ultimately how others see 'us' will eventually shape our development. We see a struggling teenage girl sorting through some issues within herself, but to society, she appears to be a confident, beautiful young woman.

Which leads me to believe that you might be illustrating that the facade is in fact the girl in the bathroom and not the girl on the stairs... the girl cutting herself is the superficial and temporary face of her nature... especially if I go along with the theory that society shapes identity... not sure what you intended :) This is where my own interpretations come into play...

Anyway, thanks for sharing. Enjoyed the film!

I simply love your review.

We talked a long time about that last shot (it actually was our last shot of the evening). We talked about all that had occurred before - the weight of it - and yet the importance of keeping that inside and letting the audience bring their own voice to it.

Hearing you think through the meaning of "self betrayal" and the "facade" makes me feel like it was all worthwhile.

I can't wait to share your review with the cast and crew. Thank you very much.

[Shawn Philip Nelson]

The actress is 17. For me, the character is so "naked" emotionally, I felt like that was enough. Anyway, thanks for the compliments, I'm touched this felt real and that it effected you.

I wasnt in ANY way suggesting we should have seen the actress naked, just that it might have been more powerful for the character to have been evaluating herself under those circumstances, plus the steam could have been more cinematic in piece that isnt really cinematic per se. Just to clarify.

[Chris Messineo]

I wasnt in ANY way suggesting we should have seen the actress naked, just that it might have been more powerful for the character to have been evaluating herself under those circumstances, plus the steam could have been more cinematic in piece that isnt really cinematic per se. Just to clarify.

I totally understand and never thought you were suggesting anything inappropriate.

[preachason]

That's cool that you like the logo - you wouldn't believe how many designs we went through before we settled on something so simple. :)

Yeah, fan-TAST-ic logo.

The music is exactly what I imagined. Well done all around.

[Bigmagic]

I loved the cinematography, I missed the sound of her sobbing and the ambient sounds from the room itself. Overall very well done.

[Tunnelmen]

Thank......God.........This was awesome Chris. I'm going blind because I've read so many, "I am a robot, the future is coming, here are technical aspects that weren't right, you should be expelled from film school" posts.....Ok, I'm half kidding, I realize the need for technical criticisms. Its just nice to see something like this. I loved it. I would have liked to see her really slap the crap out of herself, seemed like she was pulling up a little. Overall though man, you knocked it out of the park. I loved when she went back to blow drying and combing her hair. Great Job!

[alex whitmer]

Great, great film, Chris. Your attention to detail made it 1000% believable.

You gave us a glimpse of the past, present and future seamlessly. Kudos.

Really love the 'here she is' ending.

Outstanding performance.


If this were Wheel of Fortune, I'd be trying to buy a few extra stars for you.

alex

[Chris Messineo]

The music is exactly what I imagined. Well done all around.

Very cool. Thanks.


I loved the cinematography, I missed the sound of her sobbing and the ambient sounds from the room itself. Overall very well done.

Thanks a lot. I'm glad you dug the look.


Thank......God.........This was awesome Chris. I'm going blind because I've read so many, "I am a robot, the future is coming, here are technical aspects that weren't right, you should be expelled from film school" posts.....Ok, I'm half kidding, I realize the need for technical criticisms. Its just nice to see something like this. I loved it. I would have liked to see her really slap the crap out of herself, seemed like she was pulling up a little. Overall though man, you knocked it out of the park. I loved when she went back to blow drying and combing her hair. Great Job!

What, you didn't know she was a robot?

Seriously though, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.


Great, great film, Chris. Your attention to detail made it 1000% believable.

You gave us a glimpse of the past, present and future seamlessly. Kudos.

Really love the 'here she is' ending.

Outstanding performance.

If this were Wheel of Fortune, I'd be trying to buy a few extra stars for you.

Thank you so much. I love your writing ("Chasing Kangaroos" is still one of my favorites) and it means a lot to me that you liked our film.

[chriscurl]

I admit it, I teared up. Damn, dude.

[randal t.]

I really liked the distance in this film, how close we get to this person, but really how very far away we are, especially in the last shot. I also really liked the tone the subject was presented in. Well done sir!

[Blaine]

I really liked what you did here, Chris. I was at first put off that it was totally silent (no sound design) other than the music, but it has really stayed with me and now I think it's better that way. I thought everything in this hit the right notes, including the ending. Very good job on an intimate story.

[jemduff]

There was lots to like about this film with exellent visuals, music and flawless performance!

I was very glad that there was no voice over... not that that is always a bad thing but this flick had heaps of impact because it didn't have VO and you just had to get into her world.

I also liked the up ending when she cracks a smile!

Nice work.

[The Falcone]

Really bothersome. I like the way you exposed her inner-termoil and disatisfaction with her appearance to the point of self punishment. Very simple and well done.
Your actress was brilliant and I am glad that you didn't use any scripted words. Actions told the story well.
I'm not very technical but I enjoyed the preformance, the story and the close shots that made me hurt as if she was part of my family. That is what it's about isn't it, making your audiance feel emotions. Enjoyed it. Well done.

[Chris Messineo]

I admit it, I teared up. Damn, dude.

Wow. That's pretty cool.


I really liked the distance in this film, how close we get to this person, but really how very far away we are, especially in the last shot. I also really liked the tone the subject was presented in. Well done sir!

Thank you very much. Sometimes I think the trick with a film like this, is not to try and do to much and just stay out of the actor's way. I'm really happy you liked it.


I really liked what you did here, Chris. I was at first put off that it was totally silent (no sound design) other than the music, but it has really stayed with me and now I think it's better that way. I thought everything in this hit the right notes, including the ending. Very good job on an intimate story.

Thanks for thinking about it. As I mentioned earlier, we recorded sound, but there was something about the absence of sound, that made me feel like we were somehow closer with the character, almost as if we were inside her head. Anyway, I'm thrilled that it worked for you and that you enjoyed it.


There was lots to like about this film with exellent visuals, music and flawless performance!

I was very glad that there was no voice over... not that that is always a bad thing but this flick had heaps of impact because it didn't have VO and you just had to get into her world.

I also liked the up ending when she cracks a smile!

Nice work.

I agree, I love voice over, but I think it's so hard to do well. We were lucky and our actress was able to tell so much of the story with her eyes. Thanks for all of your kind words.


Really bothersome. I like the way you exposed her inner-termoil and disatisfaction with her appearance to the point of self punishment. Very simple and well done.
Your actress was brilliant and I am glad that you didn't use any scripted words. Actions told the story well.
I'm not very technical but I enjoyed the preformance, the story and the close shots that made me hurt as if she was part of my family. That is what it's about isn't it, making your audiance feel emotions. Enjoyed it. Well done.

I really appreciate you comments, especially coming from another talented actor in the fest. I will be sure to let Alexandra know what you thought.

[jasonthewho]

The opening moment, and how it works with the score, is very effective.

At 58 secs in, instead of the lean back with the awkward cut, I would try jump cutting to her taking her robe off in the wide shot. The jumpcuts you have earlier work well, and I think they thematically make sense, since they seem to echo the physical cutting that will come later.

Speaking of, the cutting is done very effectively. Have you already explained how you did it? Sorry, I haven't read through all the comments.

The smile in the mirror before she starts blow drying her hair is very effective. The ending is also effective. Even the freeze frame, which shouldn't work, does.

Someone earlier mentioned this should be a PSA. I guess my biggest problem with it for me is that that's what it feels like to me. Seems like something I would have watched in high school health education class. Now, that can either be a bad or a good thing, depending on what you were going for, what your purpose in making the film was, etc. For me though, I generally want more of a story. Basically every cutter puts on a facade. It just seems a little simple. Perhaps it's also because most stories are about change. You take a person with certain characteristics, put them in a situation that tests these characteristics, and then see if they change. We just see a cutter cut herself. This isn't the first time she does it. This isn't the last. This isn't the time she almost does, then decides not to. Not only that, there isn't even a question of change presented. We never doubt that she will cut herself. I get that that you're trying to show a person in a static place, I'm just not really sure it's a story.

Sorry I'm ranting like this. I did like the film. It's excellently done, and your lead actress does great work. It just seems a little easy, and I know you could handle a more complicated, deep story.

[Marlon Ladd]

Chris, you always come up with simple, yet thought provoking stuff. This is the kind of film that does stay with you and makes you think about it later. There's just so many dimensions to this film, I just don't know what else to say. You said alot without saying anything. Good job.

[Chris Messineo]

The opening moment, and how it works with the score, is very effective.

At 58 secs in, instead of the lean back with the awkward cut, I would try jump cutting to her taking her robe off in the wide shot. The jumpcuts you have earlier work well, and I think they thematically make sense, since they seem to echo the physical cutting that will come later.

Speaking of, the cutting is done very effectively. Have you already explained how you did it? Sorry, I haven't read through all the comments.

The smile in the mirror before she starts blow drying her hair is very effective. The ending is also effective. Even the freeze frame, which shouldn't work, does.

Someone earlier mentioned this should be a PSA. I guess my biggest problem with it for me is that that's what it feels like to me. Seems like something I would have watched in high school health education class. Now, that can either be a bad or a good thing, depending on what you were going for, what your purpose in making the film was, etc. For me though, I generally want more of a story. Basically every cutter puts on a facade. It just seems a little simple. Perhaps it's also because most stories are about change. You take a person with certain characteristics, put them in a situation that tests these characteristics, and then see if they change. We just see a cutter cut herself. This isn't the first time she does it. This isn't the last. This isn't the time she almost does, then decides not to. Not only that, there isn't even a question of change presented. We never doubt that she will cut herself. I get that that you're trying to show a person in a static place, I'm just not really sure it's a story.

Sorry I'm ranting like this. I did like the film. It's excellently done, and your lead actress does great work. It just seems a little easy, and I know you could handle a more complicated, deep story.

Thanks so much for the detailed review. I really do appreciate hearing what worked and what didn't work for you.

I definitely wasn't trying to create a PSA. I know our story isn't traditional, but I do think we have a story with a beginning, middle, and end. I actually think its harder to create something intimate and honest than it is to create something larger and artificial, but I respect your opinion and if it didn't work for you that's cool.

Regarding the cutting, I haven't explained how we did that yet, but I will after the fest is over. I don't want to ruin the experience for those who haven't seen it yet.

Lastly, I'm really pleased you liked the actress.


Chris, you always come up with simple, yet thought provoking stuff. This is the kind of film that does stay with you and makes you think about it later. There's just so many dimensions to this film, I just don't know what else to say. You said alot without saying anything. Good job.

Thank you so much.

[Tom Shortridge]

Loved this one. Good visuals, stellar performance.

I saw a couple comments that said it should be, or felt like, a PSA. I disagree - this isn't something you show to say, "cutting's bad." This is something you show to someone who has a loved one who cuts, someone who cares about the person cutting, and wants to understand the thought process of why that loved one cuts.

This film is masterful. It shows cutting not as a "bad choice," nor does it glorify it - it simply presents it and says "this is why it happens."

Well done.

[deedive]

strong piece dude:)

[Chris Messineo]

Loved this one. Good visuals, stellar performance.

I saw a couple comments that said it should be, or felt like, a PSA. I disagree - this isn't something you show to say, "cutting's bad." This is something you show to someone who has a loved one who cuts, someone who cares about the person cutting, and wants to understand the thought process of why that loved one cuts.

This film is masterful. It shows cutting not as a "bad choice," nor does it glorify it - it simply presents it and says "this is why it happens."

Well done.

Thank you very much.


strong piece dude:)

Thanks a lot dude. :)

[Chris Messineo]

Meanwhile, here is a link to our one page script in case anyone wants to see how it went from the page to the screen: www.offstagefilms.com/scripts/Facade.pdf

[Matt Harris]

I was one one of the PSA mentioners, and what I meant was, it didn't remind me of a PSA, but it was so powerful it SHOULD be a PSA.

[Chris Messineo]

I was one one of the PSA mentioners, and what I meant was, it didn't remind me of a PSA, but it was so powerful it SHOULD be a PSA.

That's very cool. Thanks.

[Noel Evans]

Chris, what I really liked was you took a very complex story and a very complex issue and put it all into a seemless form with a very simple approach that gave it real meaning.

Herman, you really worked this score well, in fact the score was a surprise part for me. I'll explain the best I can. In the beginning it really felt like it was working against the story, but as we moved in to the second half of the short where she is on the toilet it all made perfect sense. You're a master.

Well done.

[Herman Witkam]

For those who liked the soundtrack, there's now a downloadable version. You only need to become a fan by entering your email address here http://www.herman-witkam.com or here http://www.reverbnation.com/hermanwitkam - thanks for all the comments :)

[Matt Harris]

nice herman, thanks. love that track. did you do it in logic 9?

[Herman Witkam]

nice herman, thanks. love that track. did you do it in logic 9?

Cubase 5. There's lots of Native Instruments stuff in there too (Absynth, FM8), my fretless bass guitar and L.A. Scoring Strings.

[Chris Messineo]

Chris, what I really liked was you took a very complex story and a very complex issue and put it all into a seemless form with a very simple approach that gave it real meaning.

Herman, you really worked this score well, in fact the score was a surprise part for me. I'll explain the best I can. In the beginning it really felt like it was working against the story, but as we moved in to the second half of the short where she is on the toilet it all made perfect sense. You're a master.

Well done.

Thanks a lot. I'm so glad you liked it.


For those who liked the soundtrack, there's now a downloadable version. You only need to become a fan by entering your email address here http://www.herman-witkam.com or here http://www.reverbnation.com/hermanwitkam - thanks for all the comments :)

This is our fourth project together and I am always blown away by what you come up with. You never go for the obvious choice musically and I love that. Thanks for sharing the score with everyone.

[Matt Harris]

Herman the NI stuff is really good, i love Absynth. Good job, I love that track, thanks for posting it for download.

[Dan Lennox]

Wow... Very well done. I'm a big fan of your work, and this one hit hard. At first I wasn't sure, but then afterward, the images kept playing back in my mind. Very haunting.

Shots were done beautifully. Nice job.

Good soundtrack. Just like a few of the others, at first, I wasn't sure if it was working, but looking back, you pulled it off nicely.

The actress did an awesome job. Very believable and authentic. Please pass on my congratulations to her for a job well done.

[Chris Messineo]

Wow... Very well done. I'm a big fan of your work, and this one hit hard. At first I wasn't sure, but then afterward, the images kept playing back in my mind. Very haunting.

Shots were done beautifully. Nice job.

Good soundtrack. Just like a few of the others, at first, I wasn't sure if it was working, but looking back, you pulled it off nicely.

The actress did an awesome job. Very believable and authentic. Please pass on my congratulations to her for a job well done.

I'm so happy you liked it. I will definitely pass along your compliments to Alex, our actress. Thanks a lot.

[Hermn8r]

Nice film. Loved the imagery. Alex did a wonderful job in the role.

[Rodney V. Smith]

FACADE

Review: Threw me for a bit of a loop there with the opening, but it's a film that's deigned to slowly pull you into the girl's pain and her own self loathing. The music while seemingly strange at first is a perfect reflection of that, showing that everything is fine on the outside, but there's something definitely wrong. The simplicity is nice but maybe not for everyone.

Story: Simple story, thought provoking and evokes emotion for the character. All without saying a word.

Technical: Choppy editing that is more of a reflection of the story. And it was more choppy than sloppy so it felt right after a while, more planned. I wouldn't have done it any other way. Personally I might have used some of the girl's audio, but that may have distracted in the end. Who knows?

Acting: She did remarkably well wit the rang eof emotions. Good solid actor.

WrapUp: Simple and beautifully poignant.

[Chris Messineo]

Nice film. Loved the imagery. Alex did a wonderful job in the role.

Thanks a lot. I will pass along your compliments to Alex.


FACADE

Review: Threw me for a bit of a loop there with the opening, but it's a film that's deigned to slowly pull you into the girl's pain and her own self loathing. The music while seemingly strange at first is a perfect reflection of that, showing that everything is fine on the outside, but there's something definitely wrong. The simplicity is nice but maybe not for everyone.

Story: Simple story, thought provoking and evokes emotion for the character. All without saying a word.

Technical: Choppy editing that is more of a reflection of the story. And it was more choppy than sloppy so it felt right after a while, more planned. I wouldn't have done it any other way. Personally I might have used some of the girl's audio, but that may have distracted in the end. Who knows?

Acting: She did remarkably well wit the rang eof emotions. Good solid actor.

WrapUp: Simple and beautifully poignant.

Thank you so much for the detailed review. I know how careful you are with your craft and your opinion means a lot to me. I was nervous about the jump cutting, I hadn't done a lot of that before, but it felt right for this film and I'm so happy it worked for you and that your liked our film.

[Chris Messineo]

The first round is over and we didn't make the cut, but I wanted to thank everyone who has taken the time to watch and review our little film. I really do appreciate it.

I also have pretty thick skin so if anyone would like to offer any more honest criticism, I would love to hear it.

Thanks and congratulations to the finalists.

[Richard J. Johnson]

You should have made it.

[hoz]

you should be proud of your fine film!

[Chris_Keaton]

Great Film! You were my pick for the top 3. I guess my vote is a kiss of death. Sorry, but you should be proud of this film.

[Chris Messineo]

You should have made it.


you should be proud of your fine film!


Great Film! You were my pick for the top 3. I guess my vote is a kiss of death. Sorry, but you should be proud of this film.

Thanks guys. I am very proud of our film.

I'm also very happy for the top ten finalists too - I truly enjoyed all of those films.

I kind of thought people would have a strong reaction to our film (good or bad) and so I can't say I'm not surprised we didn't make the top ten.

[Chris Messineo]

A few people have asked how we did the razor blade and blood.

It took a lot of experimentation, but in the end it was actually very easy.

1. Take a razor blade and file down one edge (with a metal file) so that it is no longer sharp.
2. Dip dull edge in blood mix and wipe blood off side facing camera.
3. Drag razor blade across skin. It will leave a trail of blood like a felt-tip pen.

That's it.

[Norm Sanders]

Hey Chris,

I've got to start out with saying I think you had the best practical visual effect I'd seen in the fest yet ... the cutting with that razor blade looked INCREDIBLY REAL ... to the point I was questioning if the actress actually took one for the team on that, or if you posted that as a requirement when looking for "cutters" on craigslist or something!

Typically a film with no words, in my book, would be classified as an art film ... but the message in this was so clear & loud, I can't call it that. Well done, and a cool bent on doing no words without even ever hearing any audio ... simply score to drive what's happening, and even the score itself never tried to manipulate us in what we were seeing ... in some respects, just ambient background music.

I dig this, and my only regret is that I didn't see it sooner ... though the short you did with the voice mail from the 9/11 event left me with a more stunned after effect than this one. :)

[Tim Joy]

I think this was well done, as was your last entry that Norm mentions.

I have to wonder if the running time affects how seriously people take these type of entries?
Remember the one that The MacB/ Beamer brothers made for Questfest? It was a big buildup to what was essentially a one-liner, but it was hilarious and very well done. It didn't make it into the finalists either. It was about 1:30 if I remember right.

There are quite a few other examples of entries under 2-3 min that never made it that I thought were much better than some of the finalists. It would seem that a short short is not given as much weight as a 5-6 min entry. ?

There's the other factor that is appeal of an audience. We all know that this audience is mostly filled with young feeble-minded men (myself included), so your subject matter might also have limited appeal here. I think this will be a great piece for you to play at festivals though, and with the right audience it will certainly spark a discussion on the delicate subject.

Your stuff is great, and if you enter one of these again, I would suggest making a longer one... oh yeah, and maybe add a hitman or a go go dancer. :) jk

[Chris Messineo]

Hey Chris,

I've got to start out with saying I think you had the best practical visual effect I'd seen in the fest yet ... the cutting with that razor blade looked INCREDIBLY REAL ... to the point I was questioning if the actress actually took one for the team on that, or if you posted that as a requirement when looking for "cutters" on craigslist or something!

Typically a film with no words, in my book, would be classified as an art film ... but the message in this was so clear & loud, I can't call it that. Well done, and a cool bent on doing no words without even ever hearing any audio ... simply score to drive what's happening, and even the score itself never tried to manipulate us in what we were seeing ... in some respects, just ambient background music.

I dig this, and my only regret is that I didn't see it sooner ... though the short you did with the voice mail from the 9/11 event left me with a more stunned after effect than this one. :)

Thank you so much for the wonderful review.

We were very nervous about the cutting looking faked - so we worked very hard to try and fake it well. I've had a few people who actually assumed we had an actress willing to cut herself.

As you can tell, I like the smaller more intimate stories and even if they don't have a broad appeal, it's very cool when they reach an audience like yourself.


I think this was well done, as was your last entry that Norm mentions.

I have to wonder if the running time affects how seriously people take these type of entries?
Remember the one that The MacB/ Beamer brothers made for Questfest? It was a big buildup to what was essentially a one-liner, but it was hilarious and very well done. It didn't make it into the finalists either. It was about 1:30 if I remember right.

There are quite a few other examples of entries under 2-3 min that never made it that I thought were much better than some of the finalists. It would seem that a short short is not given as much weight as a 5-6 min entry. ?

There's the other factor that is appeal of an audience. We all know that this audience is mostly filled with young feeble-minded men (myself included), so your subject matter might also have limited appeal here. I think this will be a great piece for you to play at festivals though, and with the right audience it will certainly spark a discussion on the delicate subject.

Your stuff is great, and if you enter one of these again, I would suggest making a longer one... oh yeah, and maybe add a hitman or a go go dancer. :) jk

That is an interesting point about the running time. I like the "super-short" films, but I can see what some might think they are too slight.

For our next film I think we will have to have a "stripper assassin". :)

[Stephen Mick]

I am intrigued by the whole "stripper assassin" idea. :D

But I'm really here to pass along congratulations to Alexandra Landau…

http://www.filmeveryday.com/2010/03/23/1st-semi-annual-festie-award-winners/

[totitefilms]

I like the FX of this film. I was like "wow, how did he do it". The story is a little plain though, not much action or drama. Other than the story, this is nicely made movie.

[Chris Messineo]

I am intrigued by the whole "stripper assassin" idea. :D

But I'm really here to pass along congratulations to Alexandra Landau…

http://www.filmeveryday.com/2010/03/23/1st-semi-annual-festie-award-winners/

Alexanda is beyond thrilled. Thanks again for honoring her performance.


I like the FX of this film. I was like "wow, how did he do it". The story is a little plain though, not much action or drama. Other than the story, this is nicely made movie.

Thanks for watching our film. We worked hard at trying to create as realistic a moment as possible and I'm glad it felt authentic to everyone.

[Robbie Comeau]

I've got to start out with saying I think you had the best practical visual effect I'd seen in the fest yet ... the cutting with that razor blade looked INCREDIBLY REAL ... to the point I was questioning if the actress actually took one for the team on that, or if you posted that as a requirement when looking for "cutters" on craigslist or something!


Lol. Exactly my thoughts.

Nicely done Chris.

Robbie