View Full Version : In the Garage
danielisaiah
10-23-2009, 10:12 AM
My first real "FILM" where I had an agenda - Plot: Stuck in a dream...not really a nightmare....just a weird dream where I cant get out of my garage.....
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Rakesh Jacob
10-23-2009, 10:21 AM
Dude that was awesome! Really dig the vibe!
jonE5
10-23-2009, 10:24 AM
What was this shot on?
Some interesting shots, i like the score you chose to. However i think you take to long to introduce the character. The opening minute or so is just sort of random abstract shots of pipes and lights after the green part.
Id like to see a bit more writing next time. How did you manage the hand held shots? (or ones of your face)
Dave87
10-23-2009, 10:57 AM
nice piece. i would cut the blue/green effects, they aren`t from this film.
danielisaiah
10-23-2009, 12:13 PM
What was this shot on?
Hey we're not supossed to talk ab out that here! :happy:
Dave87 - Not sure what you mean....are you talking about the TV static effects? I guess i was trying recreate this dream I had where I was watching myself walk through a parking garage on a busted tc screen.
Rakesh Jacob
10-23-2009, 12:13 PM
i would cut the blue/green effects, they aren`t from this film.
Curious... what do you mean?
cowpunk52
10-25-2009, 12:55 PM
Nice job - really interesting abstract piece, and you used your vDSLR to it's strengths really well. Kinda perfect for Halloween, too.
commanderspike
10-25-2009, 02:50 PM
Cool location, liked the idea and the first person perspective. The nokia ring tone did my head in - thought a phone was going off in the room! It's got quite a good paranoid vibe to it. I think you nailed the dream-like atmosphere very well. I must admit it didn't hold my attention too well beyond half way though. It needed a change in the middle. Just my personal opinion.
I am thinking of doing an abstract DSLR movie or music video. A mood piece but with a narrative to it. Sometimes I enjoy just being alone with a camera, no actors and just experimenting with ideas. It's filmmaking at it's most simple and raw.
I have a fisheye lens that could act as the POV of the person, with only his arms and hands visible.
J Davis
10-25-2009, 05:06 PM
That was some nice visuals there. What was the music?
If I were to guess, voice sounded like Björk. Audio production like massive attack or german minimal stuff.
yommytacoe
10-25-2009, 06:38 PM
i dig the daron aaronofsky angle.
Those are some nasty looking spiders in there!!! You need to spray some DDT in there!
Nice short film too