Lingerie Spec Ad

[dirAPatterson]

A Generic Lingerie Ad for my Portfolio. It's really more of an Ad for the Prod.Company that finance it than is for a Lingerie company. Tell me what you think.


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xXyRBS4pnOg

[unistar18]

Hi.. Nice work. Was the lighting change ( :34 to cut :35 ) intentional? The temps on your female actor go abit red at that point. Anyway nice work.

[galbach]

Nice job overall..Lighting was a little flat in my opinion..Maybe you can grade it in magic bullet or color...add vignette perhaps... Again good job!

[ESTEBEVERDE]

Your man needs some coconut oil! He's a bit ashy! lolz.... The lighting at the end is perfect! I would reshoot with coconut oil and better lighting and you have a winner! ;-)

[Everts]

+1 with Esteverde its good but it can be better ...maybe an Old Spice bit lol no ?
Do a B+W conversion and see how if u like it ?

[Razz16mm]

Pretty model. Ugly setting.