30s Winery Commercial (Rough)

[Andrew J. Allsbury]

Hey guys, please let me know your thoughts on this ad, input would be greatly appreciated!

http://exposureroom.com/wrc2
pw: creativewave

Equipment Used:
XHA1
Letus Extreme
Nikkon 50mm f1.4

[Andrew J. Allsbury]

Bueller? Bueller?

[Fourth Line]

I thought it was pretty nice. Not a big fan of the font used for the info at the end (the wine tasting times and the website) - it doesn't say "winery".
Also, the first time a word appears, "Drink", it takes a while to figure out it is indeed "drink" since the D is the last letter to appear. This takes away from me engaging quickly in the commercial.

The visuals looks great.

What gear did you use?

[Andrew J. Allsbury]

We used:
Canon XHA1 (Vivid RGB Preset)
Letus Extreme
Nikon 50mm f1.4
Slight Color Grading in MB Looks

Thanks for the input! We are currently discussing song font and other graphic revisions for the final product.

[Voytech]

Video was great. I have some issues with the animated (or not) character... seems distracting and out of place.

[yabyum]

the Relax scene the guy hardly looks relaxed