My ex3 reel...

[tonykart125]

Hey guys. I created this reel to show clients my work (obvi).

But I would love to hear your feedback.

I haven't taken it through color and I am on the fence of whether or not I should.

All feedback is appreciated. I am trying to learn.

90% of the work I do is sit down locked off interviews/man no the street stuff. Which is why there is no great dolly shots.

Tell me what shots you think should be added. I think I definitely need a nice time lapse and idk what else.

Every thought is appreciated.

http://vimeo.com/3023130

[Cori_Kipps]

Very nice colors/shots. i would say place your lapel so the mic wire is hidden next time though.

[tonykart125]

Thanks a lot cori. I wasn't the sound guy on that and your totally right i should of said something.

[MitchLewis]

Nice shots Patrick! I'm very jealous of your footage right now, as the weather around here has been very gloomy. I'm looking forward to shooting outdoors (with some bright light - finally!) so I can shoot at something other than wide open.

I especially like your shots inside the hospital. I recently did a surgery shoot for a local hospital. I'll upload it to Vimeo so we can compare notes.

[tonykart125]

Thanks Mitch. I am working on a different edit where I will get some more cinematic stuff.

[James Dierx]

Loved it! I think you should color correct it! And is that original music?

[Pascal Payant]

great little short you got there. i think it's more a short than a real. you should have go into deep into all this. the point was coool. don,t let it be your demo. create a short

[tonykart125]

Hey Pascal. The reel is little pieces of multiple projects I have shot. Each shot has an edit that goes along with it.

James thanks a bunch. My sis lives in chicago;) and a I agree that a good color job is necessary(spelling?) Not my music.

[jujufactory]

The shots look a bit hot and overexposed. Have you ever tried a 35mm lens adaptor to lower depth of field?

[tonykart125]

juju the on the street stuff is def hot. I am ordering mine this week. I spent way to muhc money when i first got the cam to buy the adapter as well.

[frisco]

The shots look a bit hot and overexposed. Have you ever tried a 35mm lens adaptor to lower depth of field?

Some people get to hung up on lens adapters. I thought the OP did fine on selective and moving focus. I do agree the content could be much stronger with some color, contrast, exposure and saturation adjustments.

frisco

[tonykart125]

Bringing it to color as we speak frisco.

[Jolfer]

What song was it? Very nice shots and colors.

[frisco]

tonykart125,

You race? I raced/developed 80 shifters when the class just started. Also sponsored a couple guys in 125 and 250

frisco

[tonykart125]

Yessir. I have a tonykart with a moto package. its actually for sale right now though so I can buy another camera.

[frisco]

I helped out Ron and Joe White. The first shifter Ron ever drove was my 80. Here is a pic I did for Ron's Star Mazda effort.

frisco

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[tonykart125]

frisco thats awesome man. big names. great pic.